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05-30-03, 06:26 PM | #1 | ||||||
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poem keystyle...
IP: 0935 EE0F
angellic sounds developed deep within tha chambers,
where brains cyper ideas, thoughts, tha lost are found/ where words surround and drown out the reality, my fallacy breathes, my falshood found a sanctum/ poetic scriptures take minds on trips to pain, thru my window the beholder determines beauty/ read my persona on tha paper, as my fight insues, thru times, to describe my life to u thru these lines/ thru minds i touch hearts, kill fears, seek joy, live pain, bleed sorrow, tha sun speaks to its boy/ the seas and skies are crimson, tha grass is blue, blood is green, my world, w/ this paper i am GOD/ w/ these rhymes i connect cultures, and feed wisdom, inspiration to tha people, uplift w/ ink that seeps to/ tha dark places in time bringing hope and light, ingulf tha soul, console strife, my pens nature.... |
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05-31-03, 08:17 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 17BA BD61
It's Alright I Guess...They RHyme Scheme Is A Little Off, And Its Hard To Get The Meaning From It, Its Real Encrypted...But Other Than That Its A Good Piece
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05-31-03, 01:02 PM | #3 | ||||||
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its not really suppose to rhyme much thats the way i wanted it but if u guys think it shouldve rhymed ill keep that i mind, uppin...
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