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Old 05-26-03, 09:29 PM   #1
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Arrow WE OuR........................what we our.............

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For security reasons, all who wish to read this will be eliminated from the human source code book, Thank You

The path blinds the one from the deep secrets, an illusion, a reality based upon rules. these rules govern that our intellect can only be based upon two sets, morale and immoral. A small change is a huge turn.



we our the signature, the blood that is tipped on scriptures//
minds our our fixtures that control everyday things//
we our the reason why power has become none//
we continue to exist, people will hype upon a new myth//
to conclude shit, but all ends in blood, sweat and arguments//
we our the replacement - patients of the experimentational agents//
we live by an A, colon, slash ,execution, set node, code infusion
we our the encryption, a code which is broken by 7 elements//
we our earth, that has buried the surivival methods//
we our the visitors that enhabited this planet//
left a group of species to see how they would managed//
we our the eyes, a thousands satilites//
watched right from re-birth to pre-die//
we our the binary, a minority which lives upon morality//
we our masked upon our reality//
we our the ones who try to organize shit, like the 7 seas//
we our the media that portrays of types of mythical shit//
to force your direction with images, and words from the propaganda genisis//
we our the ones who found mysticism in the children// ( www.neotech.com)
victims of the goverment, a kiss to settle them//
we our humanities only people who have mastered mastery//
practically we can control men from our seats//
we our darkness, a monument, a liquidised fire marching//
we our the illumation from ya bulb, a camera which is installed//
to watch you type on the rap-board from our home//
we our the things in the corners of your eyes//
we push people to go beyond the borders of there lives//
we our the substitute, logic-proof minds that can move//
we our movement of convection, we our the sparks from ya friction//
we our the reason you feel cold shivers//
we our the people who interect with prisoners//
so when they are realised they stick to the good shit//
we our a stomach ache, we were the ones we had eaten ya bruvvas cake//
we our the the reason cats purr, the reason why fish rise to emerge//
we our the one, a million single, a vomit from an empty stomach//
the one who makes you think, its all fucked up


The path blinds the one from the deep secrets, an illusion, a reality based upon rules. these rules govern that our intellect can only be based upon two sets, morale and immoral. A small change is a huge turn.
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Old 05-26-03, 10:44 PM   #2
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the intro was good.... wasn't feeling your style though....

too basic... the structure was fucked up... a pretty basic spit...

5/10

keep droppin
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Old 05-26-03, 10:55 PM   #3
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I gotta say I liked it. The repeating sounded pretty mad coz when I first saw it I thought it would be toy. The lines that worked the best to were when you had one WE ARE line followed by a different one, like:
we our the media that portrays of types of mythical shit//
to force your direction with images, and words from the propaganda genisis//
we our the ones who found mysticism in the children//
victims of the goverment, a kiss to settle them//
we our humanities only people who have mastered mastery//
practically we can control men from our seats//

All in all, not the best I have read, but certainly not bad. Some mad original ideas, okay flow. Plenty to work with fo sure.
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Old 05-27-03, 01:13 AM   #4
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why does every line start with we? it seems like a long courus more then a song, i could tell you have potential but you need to tap into it. elevate
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Old 05-27-03, 01:41 AM   #5
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Nothing much to ssay bout a good flow. 8/10
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