lmao... be warned... this was inspired by nude girls wrestling

I met this bitch and her name was lucy/
Said spread your legs you lookin pretty juicy/
She gave me the finger, So i said "screw me"/
2 hours later, i had her makin porn movies/
Afterwards we smoked a whole buncha doobies/
Not famous but i gotta whole lotta groupies/
Theres a 99% chance you chick blew me!/

Just takes one phrase so you can get laid/
Sell the home videos so you can get paid/
It's easy and this is all you gotta say/
Get down on all fours and shut the door/
Get off my bed, we fuckin on the floor/
Cause like Lemueiux I'm about to score/
Use a condom? What the hell is that for?/

On my way to work, schemin this chick on the train/
Large lips, i bet the bitch give some mean brains/
Kinda chubby so a boner gonna be hard to maintain/
But the sexual urge is just too much to contain/
Open your mouth bitch cause its about to rain/
Its my stop and I got her slurpin on my vein/
Aye yo, shut up and dont try to complain/
Come inside and let me get out those cum stains/

Just takes one phrase so you can get laid/
Sell the home videos so you can get paid/
It's easy and this is all you gotta say/
Get down on all fours and shut the door/
Get off my bed, we fuckin on the floor/
Cause like Lemueiux I'm about to score/
Use a condom? What the hell is that for?/

This kinda thing goes on everyday in my life/
Hell, i bet even used these lines on your wife/
But dont get mad cause i let you in on the secret/
They always fall for "suck my dick then i'll eat it"/
But then you say "beat it", you better heed it/
Shit, this is valuable text, you gotta read it/

Just takes one phrase so you can get laid/
Sell the home videos so you can get paid/
It's easy and this is all you gotta say/
Get down on all fours and shut the door/
Get off my bed, we fuckin on the floor/
Cause like Lemueiux I'm about to score/
Use a condom? What the hell is that for?/

RB's Legends... For Sure... Lol

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this sux

hard core

rb legends ..... no






















bitch

^ word.
basic rhyme scheme,
no realk internals/ externals
no wordplay
vivid imagery and little emotion


not an RB Legend, cunt!

lol.. inspire... you suck

^lol for not picking up sarcasm...
Kapone... dont make me tell everyone you clicked on the link... homo

hahahahah its da first time that I've seen some1 tell inspire that her Verse sucked..........This drop was kinda whack..........Basic Rhymes , But hell i've never seen femcees use Vocab ....Inspire u can do better , , I've seen u better.......I got faith in you...........I got faith in u..........I GOT FAITHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I met this bitch and her name was lucy/
Said spread your legs you lookin pretty juicy/
^^^^hahahahahahahhahahhahha ,

i don't like this one bit

decent drop fam

i didnt think it was as bad as everyones sayin, the rhyme structure was basic, but hey sometimes that works

try puttin in some multis, wordplay, etc

if nothing else, it was comic relief, some of it was funny

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I tried to rewind time but my hindsight is blind

^^god you people are stupid... open mic is a fun method of freeposting... in case you all didnt notice... it was a joke... and bash... i'm not a femcee... where the hell did you pull that one from? femcees dont write shit about fucking girls and getting head on the train... dumbass... and i dont want to do your collab either... lol

ok it was a joke, i still don't like it

that was aight....keep workin at it.... i know that i need some work

i gots to agree wit erybody else on this one unlike your other shit that u spit, this sucked,i dont know it was to simple and it didnt piece together very well,poor structure i guess u could say,dont feel to bad though im havin a shitty day tonight too.i dont know keep postin thos shitty days come then go.

^^sorry ladies... lol

Ok, lets make this clear for everyone...
1. This was not an attempt at any great piece of work
2. Its a joke, you weren't meant to analyze it
3. I do stupid open mics to freepost
4. Kapone's homepage is: http://www.swallowitall.com
5. I did not plan to put in good vocab, multis and the like.
6. I'm doper than you anyways... except for maybe vortex...

lol so stop replying, its a joke... and a very fun way to up post count...

lol - http://www.swallowitall.com/