th following ill ass shit you are about to hear is based on actual events.........and shall not be reproduced without the express written consent of Damani-DaGrinch.....lol

black text= Damani-DaGrinch
blue text= mah concience

hook x1
all of us have our better half//thats me the concience//
but when we high and drunk cuz// we think thats nonsense//
so i cut the voice out// hey what are you doin//
cuz i gotta get my money now// screw it lets do it//

I never thought this shit could ever happen in my life// high speed chase with the wheel in my left and the blunt in my right// but ill start this tale off from the very begining// how it went from a normal day to crashing a car up in eppely// i started off skippin school gettin bent off da henney// tryin to get head from lori, precious, or that bitch jenny// but it took a turn fo da worst when the homey came through// talkin bout a convertible on 63rd and maple// we only 3 blocks away and the time is tickin// if we hurry the fuck up than we can make this car missin// but right then is when motha fuckin concience came in talkin bout// dont get yourself into this sticky situation// your lifes already fucked up// dont make it worse// locked up for 10 to life wishin for death and a hearse// just imagine your mother gettin that call on the cell// your son is in jail// damn son dont you think shell be hurt// thats when i cut the voice out and i fuckin ignored it// alcahol has my decision making distorted// well if you aint listenin than take this shit as a warnin//

hook x2

well why we wastin time// lets go right now// thats when kevin cracked a smile and said i knew youd be down// now we runnin down the block steady up on the sneak// tryin to creep on the car and be indescreet// jumped in the shit skirted out and smashed down the street// now we rollin 4 deep// stuntin in a new car drunk and sommore cronned// not knowin where the fuck we are// after that we tried to hit the weed spot but they was a little paranoid thinkin white ass kevin was a fuckin cop// by now its half past 11 o'clock// we was rollin tha strip and took a right on dodge when suddenly we caught sights of an undercover cop// he pulled up on my left and threw the blue light on top// but that just made me go faster than old dirty bastard after he stabbed her// then i heard a voice yell WHAT A DISASTER!!!// i tried to warn you bout this shit but my opinion dont matter// pull over, turn yourself in before it gets worse// before the motha fuckin pigs bullets disperse// i can see it in the daily paper tomorrow morning// car theif saw the officers and started stormin// within minutes 5 persuing officers were swarmin// shots were fired through his rear winshield cuz he failed to yield// officer davis stated that he had a weapon concieled// two bullets missed and one went through the back of his head// the car spun and crashed the passengers were instantly dead// do you really want that for you and your friends// whats it gonna take to fuckin shut you up// ima hit this blunt and run// cuz its my life and i aint gettin caught//

hook x2

now the chase is on/ i said i aint gettin caught and i fukin meant it/ runnin from the cops my concience and a 10 year sentance// exceeding speeds of 95 through residential benson// by now one more unit is involved in the chase// and i realized this aint driver or some video game// these motha fukin pigs aint that easy to shake// then....bitch in the back seat screamed and broke my concentra-tion/ i reached back to slap her motha fuckin face... when// i accidentally jerked the wheel heard the tires squeel and we started to spin//we slid a bit and almost wrapped it on a pole// but a moment before impact i regained control// than someone screamed WHOA!!!! THAT WAS FUCKIN CLOSE// i looked around the car and nobody had said a word than i realised it was my bitch ass concience that a nigga heard// just stop the car and make your fuckin hands raise// tyronne's cousin jenna works for the state and shell handle your case// shell say that the bud and liquor fucked up your mind state//you can plead insanity and get a lesser sentance// or have your face on a tshirt in loving remembrance// shit i should have listened to you before but its too late now// with this many charges a nigga aint gon never get out//

hook x2

by now we gained a couple blocks ground on the units// turned into a back alley and i just said screw it// slammed on the breaks but the dirt had me straight slidin// like it wasnt a car but instead a bobsled a nigga was ridin// we slid a little more and crashed through a wood fence// now the cars in the back yard smokin trailed by tire skids// we jumped out turned and dispersed in different directions and dipped// my nigga abel lived a couple blocks away so i hit him up on the cell//he picked up like i dont give a fuck unless this is satan calling from hell// i yelled in the phone its me hurry up get here quick// we runnin from the cops and on foot i dont know how far we can get// within a matter of seconds that nigga was there//plowed through the other fence but didnt even fuckin care// that nigga abel quickly rushed us to safety// after that adrenaline rush the rest was all kind of hazy// as for my concience i never again heard fom the bitch// i guess cuz i cotradicted him and my plan still went off without a hitch// that must have been what eventually killed it..


this short story was done for audio....but right now im stuck with a shitty ass computer and to broke to afford a mic... ima try and steal one from school though so look fo dis piece commin soon in audio

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damn this was long it took a while to read but when it was done i felt it was dope solid flow throw all the verses and the hook worked well too. keep that shit up

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yo damani tat was just straight ill im feelin ya and i cant wait till its in audio keep it up man

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keep lethal in thy beatin heart/
let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


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yo dis shyt wass hott. keep writin. uno doggy

thanx fo da props yall....
its just a bitch that so many people r sleepin on dis...
i was feelin dis piece N i wanna know how yall feel

YO MY NIG THAT WAS HOT KEEP IT UP
I WAS FEELING THAT CONCIENCE IDEA

seems familiar subject matter, but it was good - kinda long to read.................maybe it would be more emphasized as an audio.
peace

hell yeah trust nigga it is emphasized in audio fo sho..

it comes off as kinda tight when you read it but its fuckin siccness when i spit the way i made this piece to sound like....

dawg that story is built fa audio, hurry up and put that shit on there kid on the real. you get mad props fa this. im lovin the concious theme fa real.

stay up dawg.

now go reply to my shyt (slum flow)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=17122

keep writin ya hot shyt.

1ne

uppin

WHERES THE FUCKIN LOVE?
i can see that a lot of yall are peepin dis piece but why isnt anyone postin....
give a nigga some fuckin feedback please...

uppin

This was a good collaberation but it was very long, took a long time to read but enjoyable. Some good expression in there, keep it up and elevate, you still need to improve on a few things so keep writing, practice makes perfect.

that was fuckin deep cam frrom yo heart. it is diffrent from other rhymes. get it up