lo fi-

http://64.68.1.185/emgel8LoH/sinica...whyshootthe.mp3

hi fi-

http://64.68.1.185/emgel8HiH/sinica...whyshootthe.mp3

2 d/l go 2:

http://soundclick.com/bands/5/sinicalwizdommusic.htm


hook- 45(me)

1st verse- 45

hook- 45

2nd verse- fival mc

hook- 45

3rd- 45

4th- fival

beat created/trk mixed by fival mc

responses will be highly appreciated y'all.
i'll return da fav 2 those who listin n leave crit.

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

well....wasn't feelin the hook...wasn't really anything special about it.....both emcees delivery was kinda off, then you caught your flows, but then speeded up cuz you tried to keep up with the beat, so u started rappin fast...you dont really have to do this, just break down your lyrics, so it everything fits....unless the beat is fast pace, then thats a different story, but going fast because u tryin to keep up only makes u lose track of the beat.....remember everything is a 4 count....just keep that in mind.....this was iight tho, keep doing your thing....OnE




I'm Ghost...

shit was pretty nice to me homie...catchy ass hook....nice rhymes....ur flow was pretty good....nice beat....i gotta give u this yo....this was pretty fuckin good honestly.....

RATING
9/10

peace
4:20

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thanx smoka.. but yo c-nice.. seein that ur not familiar w/ my steez let alone me period.. then i can kinda see how u felt that way but yo.. lol, i flow that way on purpose... i usually rap fast str8 thru trks but i've decided about a yr ago that im gonna flip my flow in more ways then just swiftly.. which is why i slow it down then speed up when i feel its da right time 2.. etc.. listin 2 some other trks n see 4 ya self dawg.. or as it seems listin 2 my 2nd verse on this trk... thanx 4 the crit anyway yo.

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

iight my nigga....nah i was just saying cuz i know these things....if you switch from one style and flip it to another in the same track, it throws u off course with the song.....but whatever makes u comfortable....OnE




I'm Ghost...

yo fo real... this shit was tight... i really like the beat
the verses... were tight... nice flow n good job on kickin it fast n not fuckin up on it... tight fo real
but the hook... fo real was tight... but the kid sayin why... kinda got annoying... it woulda been cool if he just said it less or just differently i don't know but it kinda annoyed me
but seriously... this was dope
props 2 the whole crew