spit first
no dick ridin
no crew votes
no feedin
no hatin
15 lines man

good luck

may do it in a couple of hours gonna playb-ball for a while

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I don't remember acceptin a challenge or challengin you man, but shit I'll try and think of somethin...also writin for another battle, so my verse may take lil longer

aight check it...

Before you connect the dots, use your imagination, to make the illustration/
No there’s no complication, it's me beatin’ you in this battle, go back to watchin your jap-anamation/
I’ll throw punches you won’t believe, you’ll go down for the ten count I do conceive/
I’ll dial 9-1-1 and retrieve the medical attention you need to receive/
I’m gunna add to your pain, this news so bad you gunna shit in your Hanes (underwear company)/
Your girl sayin your dick so thin, that it should be a sin/
Now now lift your chin, it’ll be fine, sure your girl is now mine/
You’ll find someone new, she may be a beast/
Sure you’d hope for more, and not have to look so poor/
But at least you’ll score, without havin a hoe cumin knockin on your door/
When the battle is over and you lost, you won’t be able to cope/
Don’t worry I got ya some rope, tied the noose, all that’s left is for your neck to snap/
Like a mouse wondering into a mouse trap/
I PUT ON THE CAPS LOCK, TO EMPHASIZE THE SIZE OF MY COCK/
I’m sorry I made you jealous, please don’t hate, but I pray don’t think of me when you masturbate/

spit..

yo check it check it...
here I go

you talk about having a big cock cause its men you knock(fuck) about my cock I let the
women talk // I guess were both white, despite the one sided lvl of this fight, Yo all you
are is a cheap thrill without the ill, Illwood ha that shit is anything but the hood ,just a
bunch of fakes that never could, step to noone thats any good, you got beef wit
Murderer's row smackin you fag away we dont want a blow go do that to your boyfriend
SLOPPY JOE, ur gettin a hard on off a picture of vincent van GO lets get off that and
talk about your lyrical defecincy, like sayin Monica Lewinski is actually pretty, that shit
is OK to a tolerabl degree, but your shit proves your not a real emcee, I got an obsession,
knockin MC's like its viewer discretion, all your shit is a idiomatic expression leadin your
rap career to its greatest depression, to the point you start a hole new proffesion. your still
got fagit expressions, i guess now I taught you your biggest lesson, you llokin to JACK
SON some MICHAEL until he says hes done, walkin around droppin babies like that
shits fun I got this won i had it before it had begun, I?ll pull out my gat on your bitch ass
and scream run/ well dogg I gotta finish this off, yo people make the right choice cause
this clown is fukin soft

yo uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
+!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for votes I'll vote on yours if ya vote on mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for votes peeps
post a link to your battle, I'll check it out and tell ya what I think, and vote when I get enough posts.....

ya I'll vote if you vote vote on ours then give me a link I'll vote on yours vote fairly
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

honestly i was pretty confused within both of ur verses....cyde..i'v seen much better...structurin ur lines must be doen for both of u.....
now as far as voting
wordplay-whyte
vocab-d'cyde
meta's-tie
punches-d'cyde
flo-d'cyde
..............................guess this one goes to D'cyde...very close tho..not bad for either one of u lightweights....jus whyte's shit seemed a lil more childish.....keep it up guys an work on that structure thing...

yo i gotta go wit my nigga d'cyde on dis one his shit sounded betta to me and i liked da it flowed so my vote goes to d'cyde

yo d'cyde holla at me in my lates battles

me vs. Lyrical G
me vs. spitter
&
me vs. Mal

yo 2-0 uppin for votes lets go vote I'll vote on yours!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i have to give it do d'cyde he came just a little bit harder and whyte your rhymes were too simple to me

yo lyrical you forgot to post your vote dogg.............................................. ................................................