i remember back in the day my life.
my girlfriend that i loved like a wife.
and the night when things fell apart.
i left the light and came to the dark.


it was a rainy prom night i was at home.
i got in trouble with mom so i couldnt go.
it blowed i sat others roamed the night.
and my girl had to go. with this guy mike.
and it pissed me off. but their friends right?
i am her lover. but i guess not tonight.
my window got fogged as i stared out of it.
my moms car pulled out like a shouting gift.
the dance was over but parties still raging.
so i ran to the desk got my keys pacing.
started racing down to my friends house.
not the only one but the best party in town.
i rolled down the street up to the drive way.
finally one day right things going my way.
i stepped into the mansion and felt odd air.
and everyone had eyes on me with an odd stare.
get out my face people i need some headroom.
my enemy mark said check the guest bedroom.
shit. the thoughts hit my head like a rock something.
and then i saw my girl and that kid mike fucking.
only in my head were these events of blasphemy.
not real so i walked up the stairs very casually.
opened the door to see mike on top of her laid.
my mind exploded like a bleeding pot of rage.
she screamed alex its not like that honey wait!
fuck that shit. i stormed outside kicking the gate.
got in my car and began to race back to my home.
the demons hovered in my car i wasnt alone.
i pulled up to my house and parked in front.
went to my parents room and got my fathers gun.
stepped out in the entry walking out the door.
when my mom pulled up "mom i have to go!"
no but i disreagarded her talk thought hardly.
i drove carefully back to that fucking party.
i saw her laughing drinking the night away.
this is fucked i shouldn't have even came.
so i walked in the door with my face in a burn.
and those odd stares immediatly had to return.
i ran and hugged my girl "lets go its getting late"
without her knowing i got the gun from my waist.
and put the bullet through the back of her head
and into my face......

together at last with no distractions to steer
i sat in a blank room and she wasnt here.
MY GOD! the anger raged presence wasnt felt.
she went to heaven and i went to hell.


til death do us part...

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fucking excellent sand,as usual tight drop,getting slept on for no reason this is.you go t the definete slug type of rhyme going ,he an ill cat,th is shit was buetiffuly done,had me goin the whole time cat,the end was the best,him ckillin her and them being seperated coz she went to heaven and he went to hell,i thought adultery was a sin ahhaa,my bad,im jus playin...nice drop,tell me you do audio...pleaasee. ahaha propz.
bismillah

Very nice Rhyme probably one of the best ive seen since i been on ( 3 days ) lol but the lyrics are very good and they all go well together noffin to comment on there ... Very nice shit.

thanks.
sorry aetrack.
no audio.
up. dont
sleep

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awww shit...hah sall good

man this was amazing...enjoyed reading that i read it twice namsayin....topic was tight, verbals were on point...damn dawg the ending was disease yo...nice shit...wahid

check Atetracks and my collab...its called Clash of the Titans...good looking out

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i realy wasn't feeling the flow of it i guess i need to hear it BUT what a nice song. the end had a great twist. this was really nice.
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remember
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you probably wont feel anything i post.
i suck. in case you didnt know. i am very
new here. and very sucky . unlike you.

wait is this backwards.....nah

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ya see? shit like this is the reason i like RB........

up this is officially legendary

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Yes, I have added this to RB Legends. This was incredible. I look forward to your next drop.

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thank you.
i wont dissapoint you.

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