IIGHT UNLIMITED LINES
DON'T MAKE IT TOO LONG
IIGHT PLAYBOY HANDLE YA BIZ
AND SPIT I'LL FOLLOW

im da illest inhospitable, leavin u in hospital//
im feelin hostile, so feel ma style//
ill leave ya layin in da gutter, guts sprayed out//
dont bother tryin to put umm back its for the best ya whack//
u must be on crack, ur shit was slack, lemme show u what u lacked//
ur rhyme missed by a mile, it was fuckin juvinile, belyle//
ur lyrically missin while im spendin ma time dissen//
fuckin coke addict, add to that, ur a choke addict//
fuckin bitch cunt, ya bearin da brunt of ma anger, im tellin u, u in danger//
bet get yo arse a canidian mountie, guard u day n night, im givin u such a fright//
but like a candian mountie, i always get ma man, bundal u in da back of ma van//
drive u to da forrest, make u suffer the worst nightmarish//
hellish experiance u ever seen, pluckin out ya spleen why ya awake//
after im done bein mean, u be wishen ur back dont break cus u a fake//
fuck u im done kickin yo arse for spittin a whack arse rap//
WHACK WHACK goes the sound a ma gun, fuckin makin sure ur gettin some//
now u dead i shot u in da head fucker, im chuckin u in da lake, n all that for bein fake//

iight just a qiuke one,,,,,,,....... be sure to vote dawgs,,, we will hit yours back......

i read a few of ya lines some were ok some were not
but i'ma show you how to make ya whole verse hot
ya shit is fucked you can tell you ain't been rappin too long
signing in on this website was the first thing that you did wrong
all you doin is tying up ya phone line, and wastin ya time
i know it hurts but face it BITCH YOU JUST CAN'T RHYME
and don't start actin just sit back and play ya postion
but i hope you get outta line, my trigger finger is itchin
fagot ass bitch, love for cats to play in ya cheeks
you on SportsCenter everyday "Gays of the Week"
don't play me i know you pussy you ain't holdin no heat
got you shook wit a flash from a kodak, bitch i'm runnin the streets

iight

IIGHT THAT AIN'T MY BEST
BUT IT SHOULD BE ENOUGH
TO FINISH THIS CAT
HOLLA BACK WIT SOME VOTES!!!!

lol, comon dawg any1 can see that ma verse was better............................................ .................................................. .....................uppin

on the real though

again zain cleand you in all aspects
you had flow in yeah verse and that didn't get you 2 far man

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PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

zainy won the other guy didnt really kick it 4 me go vote in my battle pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53173

yeh no doubts zainy won that shit! beta all round! yo dawg return da fava in my battle wiv jay da ripper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote=zainy

zainy won better flow it seems dat cat wrote it down holla back http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53484

comon dawgs hit me up,,,, qikiie here ill hit ya back.............................................. .............................

3-0 comon dawgs lets go,,,,,,,, vote n leave ya link ya now the deal.............................................

3-0 comon dawgs lets go,,,,,,,, vote n leave ya link ya now the deal.............................................

zainy can u poll that vote against jay da ripper! thanx dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dw ya vote is ma vote on ya pole na mean.............................................. ...............up..................p.............. .......in ,,,,....,,///...,