yo all these people on the board are punks/
ill kik them 2 lumps/
make them have mumps/
as my boy pumps/
on yo head/
u could be dead/
can u remember wot my ideal ricky d said/
my gun and your mouth will be newly wed/
i like gurls with there leather panties/
there underwear is not like my aunites/
they can lick my priavte parts/
i dont care if they are tarts/
punk rappers suck/
i dont give a fuck/
there outta luck/
and dey cant cook/

just a lil sumthin sumthin there fo all your punk mcs

up

hey punks check out this hot rhyme

hey dudes this rhyme is starte up dope peep it

Fart Crap wipe my ass then flush
wack wack wack

ur flow was aight but yo please change ur name man. that dude is a legend and can't be reconcilled.

shut up i am a member of his fan club

I'm feelin' what Feebi said... you should change ya name. This shit was sooooooo elementary it's not even funny. You got a LOT of work ta do. Man, you should try an' read some other niggas posts, then do some shit of your own. You need better vocab., better wordplay, everything needs to elevate. You had ONE o.k. set of lines though...

<can u remember wot my ideal ricky d said/>
<my gun and your mouth will be newly wed/>

That was an aight line... best one in the piece. HOLLA.

ok man, jus coz u use a lotta compliacted words dont mean ya good, i know im 1 of the best my peeps tell it me

Man... if your peeps tell you you're the best, they ain't heard any real m.c.'s flow. You're whack kid, I wasn't tryin' ta put it that way, but it's the truth. I'm just tellin' it how it is.

lol.. you suck, your friends pro'lly just don't want to tell you 'cause you're one of those tempremental types who'd pro'lly go home and cry if you heard the truth.. serious, give it up or atleast realize you need to elevate.. that was the most elementary rhyme I've read in a while.. my boy b-red just started writing like a month ago and his first rhyme ever was better than that...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=39340

^ see for yourself...

just thought I'd say something

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That was the dumbest shit I have ever heard. I have met deaf mutes with better rhymes and flow than that.

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Im sorry to tell ya but ya friends lied to you when they said you could spit it, i mean sure you can ryhme so maybe poetry is the wya for you to go but other than that no.

This is da whackest joint i ever read....
make them have mumps/
as my boy pumps/
on yo head/
u could be dead/
^^^hahahha.......U used Simple lyrics.........Elevate ur vocab dickhead..........U're whack as hell....And go change ur name