intro: not for pregnant women or people with heartproblems. this has been dubbed for the hearing impaired. work overhead. YEILD!

hey there everyone, the name's patrick, nice to meet ya,
damn,my voice hurts my head more than the fist in my urethra
looking for my one an only, but if she exists I can't find her,
and right I'd be fine with losing my virginity to a meat grinder
I smash my skull with sledges to break my concentration,
distorting harmful brainwaves so I'm a literal mental patient
too bad this world is a jumble of nametags and uniforms,
and it appears my life a big game of leap frog with unicorns
so here I am perscribing verbality installing netcee fright,
exposing the herbs? fuck knightshade, they call me (k)night light
drilling my dome for intuition, but my sixth sense is on holiday,
controversial like pac's death; I think I saw him at the mall today!
slicker than rick, and blastin more masters than master blaster,
in a band(banned) like Spittin Quik, but my mouth can move any faster!
writing nawshus verbs that induce vomit from the stongest health,
so high when I write that I need a barf bag, cuz I disgust myself
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agg, just writing a little battle-type topically challenged verse, because I was thinking of all this nasty shit, and threw in a few rb names. No diss to those people, I havn't even associated with most of them, but it went with my song. YOU'RE ALL MY MATERAIL! HAHAHAHA!
hit this up.

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

uppin

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

sleepy, are we?

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Not a bad piece my man, flow was cool, seemed nicely presented, topic could of been done better if taken more time to perfect it, multi's and internal rhyming would of helped step it up a level too, wordplay was nice throughout, i liked a couple of the disses towards RB members, the Spitting Quik one was ok, possibly could of been re-worded to be made better but this wasnt a bad effort at all, you'll get btter with time, thats all it is is practice - keep at it, and develop it, you have most of the basics down.

Peace!

Ill Piece cuzzn....Nice Word usage.........
so here I am perscribing verbality installing netcee fright,
exposing the herbs? fuck knightshade, they call me (k)night light
^^^^My Favorite Lines...........And one more thing.......U got beef wit Knightshade?

lol, if you read what I wrote at the end, then you'd know. I have no beef with anyone who's name I used here, just thought they'd fit nicely. I don't like Knightshade very much, but it's not beef.

Vortex, this isn't the kind of piece I normally write, this was like a 10 minute thing I wrote in english class....
Watch out for my collab with Kapone, should be up soon.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

ill
style reminded me a bit of eminem, but also something totally different

^ eminem? lmao ^

this was good. it really was
you saw him at the mall. lmao
funny shit..your a funny guy

look out for sands audio coming
soon..entitled..."eternal Sacrifice"

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oohhh... sand with an audio...
you know that'll be ill.
it better be less candid and with better quality than my audio lol

up^

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

up^

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

lol.. that shit was dope... you had some nice wordplay an' shit.... yo, we still down 4 friday at my moms.. my boy ART's lookin' 4-ward to it.. we're gettin' a 26 of amereto and a mickey of weisers whisky... lol, so if you come you'll get drunk and be part of tha collab goin' down.. Graydon Hall.. you know where it is.. give me a call tonight or I'll call you either way.. 1

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you do audio and you not say?...

psh under...lol...
sand with audio...wait till you hear the lyrics lol...ill
yarp the verse was good,like vortex mentions,internal rhymes are dope,and shoukd be considered,but i liked the verse under...lmao at the picture on that soundclick sight...ahhahha...ok now thats over..ill laugh at the getting drunk at moms business,hahaha,fun.
id smash my skull with sledges to break the concentration.
^best line right there,keep droppin understatement,like your peices