your eyes were an abyss of emotions
a sea of love, buried in the deepest oceans
not perfect, but beauty seemed to be your collection
not perfect, but never had I seen such perfection
an angel had decended, where you hid your wings, I never found
looked into the eyes of the heavens, felt my feet leave the ground
love was a gift, I was elated by your choice
elevated by the magic, that was locked in your voice
your touch was rose pettles, gracing my skin
your words seemed to sooth the pain, aching within
my heart was mesmorized, my mind was entranced
an angel in the misty rain, through the heavens you danced
captured my heart, which had never occured
I told you I loved you, without speaking a word
I touched you for the first time, my hands were shaking
no promises were promised, and none were worth making
with love I began to see life through a different angle
but God whispered to me, "you can't tie down an angel"
stubborned as I was, I ignored what I had known
prospered from the seeds, that my angel had grown
but love is never true, unless it is returned
watched the fire die in your eyes, while mine eternally burned
your eyes were an abyss of emotions, the deepest sea of love
but angels must return, to thier places above
I finally learned, what I had known all along
now all that is left, is my heart in this song
my eyes were an abyss, as dark as the night
but an angel has graced me, and shared with me her light


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Uppin dont sleep

that was tight, you should show it to her, some people dont realize what poems can do.

^^true dat stark....nah but hey i really like this poem and i really liked this line:

your touch was rose pettles, gracing my skin

i can picture that and feel that too nah mean...but it was really nice ....goodwork man....pz

nice m'n---reminded me of a lot of different emotions--cool m'n--much luv-peace\

Thanx fo da feedback

Upp

feelin it kidd...reminded me of a love i had....nice title as well...holla

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