yeh i jus freestyle imma new mc so i need opinions.......okz......

yeh to ma enemies imma muthafukin slaya
to those bitches its that pure fukin playa
i right my expressions in ma rhymes
need no confession jus ma nine
break it down to my nine milli
wit ma crew i b chilling
need no shit to pop that pill
keep tha weed lit burnin dope wid bills
betta keep this shit clean
erase tha dope scene
got ma ass busted from those police
i cant be trusted its tha west and east
got no beef wid no one
smoke tha leaf tha whole one
a.k.a muthafukin emjay
learn ma name need no pay
bitch i cant even lose
pull yo clip u got 22'z
but dey dont scare me
bitch boyz try n compare me
bitch you gon b dead
eat ma hot lead
through yo fucking head
bitch dont see yo hate
try n disriminate
i pull my ak 47
see yo ass in heaven
or i see you in hell
predict shit you cant tell

wack shit..........do not rap gangsta,,,,,,,,that was wack as fuck
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