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Topic...
The Whole 9 Yards

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cool Im battlin evolve

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"The whole 9 yards" is a topic I dont like so I switched it...........

::Heres My First Topical Verse::

I got the ball at my feet manipulating this sphere//
I got to prove my skill so now Im anticipating with fear//
Cause one wrong move could change my future,my career//
So I pass it down the "right wing" and anxiously wait for a cheer//
Haters jeer but I simply form a mental-barricade//
But suddenly,it doesent make sense like a "detrimental aid"//
I trip,fall,land on my ankle while I scream and yell in pain//
Knowing Im gone from what I used to have,proudness I used sustain//
The agony was unbearable,my "Golden foot" was now destroyed//
So now Im annoyed while the opposing players laugh at my position being void//
I enjoyed,but now Im carried off on a stretcher from the pitch//
Inside feeling like the game has abandoned me like a puppy thrown in a ditch//
I thought everyone was laughing at me,the manager,coach and the guards//
Cause I miserably failed,I barely got to approach the Whole 9 yards//
All I wanted was a second chance to surpass my enemies fast//
Until I woke up to find my pet turantula bit me in the ass//

lol......................Waitin' on you evolve

times are hard & i have trouble finding God
my mind is slippin, i live life w/ no regard
pain became a friend, i dont mind being scarred
my emotions are starved, i need to feed them
so i inject this needle & speed the demon
fast life is my wife cause im married to dreaming
got me believing that im leaving like day & evening
im i even breathing? i dont care, im getting out of here
moving quickly to my destination... which still isn't clear
im headed no where, but it has to be better then this
my legs feel light & i feel nice of the dope's kiss
veins are rich w/ blood dipped in my poison's components
my soul feels like a box of donuts, empty.. filled w/ holes
but i dont pay attention as i speed up my stroll
theres pep in my step now.. damn, i am on a roll
went from slow to fast, cant wait to get to where im gonna go
which is.... well, i dont know... away from my past
away from this mask, away from this alley of trash
& not have to ask myself "do i think this food will last?"
past this drug abuse & using, past this state of confusion
as i consentrate on all this, day light starts loosing
night time enters & my high is coming down
its dark now & i stop to look around
still hear familiar sounds, hear the movement of cars
now my focus is up as i look for God in the stars
totally out of my fog, i turn around... This Is So Bizarre!!
come to find out... all that time, im still in the alley
and i only moved a Whole Nine Yards!!!!!!

Evolve took this Hand's down

wordplay, vocab, flow it was all on point
and you kept on topic nicely
good concept

Vote=Evolve

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evolve wins... it's pro'lly the fact that it was bazzy's first topical, but evolve had a way better flow an' story line.. can you vote on me an' pledge.... 1

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yeah evolve had the better verse although bazzy had a more original concept just didnt carry it off
evolve had the better content flow and vocab
vote=evolve

seriously.......evolve raped this battle..........quote quote explain
explain blah blah blah blah respect it....vote=evolve................1

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Blessed wit Skillz

lol 13... should be 4-0 but somone forgot to Poll Vote... its aight though... 3-0... uppin for votes

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^^You won anyway dawg^^

I couldnt do a good verse because I hated the topic

P.S. My verse was about soccer,not american foorball but we call soccer, football over here

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