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first 5 votes
spit first after chick in
holla

ight man i didn't know you accepted this..i'll drop soon. . .
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come on man...
i aint got all day
just hurry up a lil playa
holla back.............
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hey man, i gotta lotta shit to do so i'll drop in a few hours
if you wanna spit b4 me then go for it..if now i'll drop later
peace............................................. ................................ - one

aight well, ill write man and drop
in like 5 min, try and get urs as soon
as ya can aight playa.... holla back
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aight,,,,

this gonna be like a bomb, its gonna hit ya hard, leave ya mentally scard, and chard like right off the grill/
gonna have ta fill your body everyday with a vicadin pill, cuz you'll hurt so bad, and i hardly tried which is sad/
this is like a lecture, on how pussy you are and how you cant rap, u best get a lyrical protecter, so u dont get killed/
cuz it was and is gonna be paintful, cuz my words are commin as fist fulls, eatin at ya like 1 thousand pitbulls/
lockin there jaws, because they eatin away you, a dead cause. livin the rest yo life in metapause/
you like on online blind kid, goin to ebay to make a bid, so you can get audio raps and write them as text/
i got my 9's aimed right at ur head, b4 i pulled the trig you feel over scared dead, just like a newly wed/
so scared cuz its changen ur life for the worse, from now on its gonna be bad, life as you will be lvin will b sad/
I aint got sympathy for you cuz you was rapped as a kid by ur dad, you gone, shit im glad, ill clean ur blood with a maxy pad/
its all your worth, you was a mistake sence birth, now you gonna be layin under a sheet at merdelwerth <<a hospital<<

aight its been hours fool
lets get this goin man,
and dont tell me you pre-
write playa, you seem betta
then that come on dude...
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droppin . . . .

Dice roller, middle weight. . four and eight..classified less than losers//
Its rhymes like ures that mess up sig URLs and freeze up our computers//
You like boxin? so im sure you seen Lennox crack-out Tyson, this is the lyrical rendition//
If 'faggot wannabe rapper who has no sense of flow or good punches' was a word then it would be ure name next to the definition//
Roller of the dice, dice roller. . keep typin it some more times i think we get it//
I've herd ure rymes before...boring the same shit is like ure name..repetive//
I would diss ure bars, but their were none, just internal and no line to match//
Just 8 worthlessly un-lyrical lines and only 1 bar that actually 'rapped' to be exact//
I'd continue but i think the keys on the keyboard are yellin at me that i dont need to type//
I'd say your alright, but that would be sayin im Thug Black, but you'll remember the name of Thug Whyte. . . end

UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN

aint no pre-writes here...i just got back from probation man
but lets upp for votes on this shit , cuz im out leavin til like 10
vote on this and i'll vote on ures............................ - one

ight no votes?? come on ppl......vote on this then consider
a done vote on your battle..........................................
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UPPIN UPPIN...........................UPPIN UPPIN........
......................UPPIN UPPIN.....................................- one

thug whyte took thuis with harderr puncehs drop a vote in my battle with constanttttttttttttttttt
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55026
thanks
and make sure you poll voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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damn this shit wus close..................
.............but i think the THug got this one.
.....................E-Syde...........
vote=Thug Whyte

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thug whyte got this to me by betta punches. ey thug now hit up my battle with delerious and poll vote for the best verse please right quick

poll vote- thug whyte