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Old 06-02-03, 09:46 AM   #1
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My Ocean...

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Too deep for 99% of ya'll... Guesses are welcome to as what this about...

Swimming in my ocean of doubts and insecurities/
Anchored to the bottom looking for puddles of purity/
Fish resemble past people, problems and predicaments/
Would swim away but apphrehended by lack of ligaments/
Holding onto a liferaft of alcohol and nicotine/
It's keeping me alive and killing my dream/
Who are you? I don't know me either/
Trying to stay awake, sniffin' the ether/
Masked people surround and drown me/
Hidden motivations while the unbound me/
Free at last, only to be chained up again/
Commotion in my ocean, lost another sick friend/
I would swim away but dive deeper in the depths/
Wish i brought a heater, so cold i can see my breath/
Hallucinations, seeing gas underwater, a dead father/
26 Christian Martyrs, 14 Angry daughters, 1 motionless otter/
Its my ocean, I came to love it, came to call it my home/
Mythological creatures, special features, 100 watt speakers/
Pyrex Beakers, Shiny Beepers, Fallen Leaders, Chome heaters/
All these contained within my tiny ocean, free will erosion/
Easily influenced, angered, endangered, enhances the promotion/
This ocean cannot be seen by friend, foe or even its creator/
Not graphed, not reachable by raft, nor any elevator/
May seem shallow but the water runs deep/
deprivation of sleep, slaughtering of the meek, movie of the week/
To think such a place even existed, to think such a person could be uplifted/
To see the power every hour constantly being shifted/
Exclusive, only accessible by the "gifted"/
Wondering geographically where this entity lies and what it beholds/
It cannot be sold, for it is mine to keep/
The ocean surrounds my brain, only accessible in sleep/

You guess it yet?
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Old 06-02-03, 09:57 AM   #2
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this shit is poetic and metaphorical!!!!!
i'm diggin it!
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Old 06-02-03, 10:27 AM   #3
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This ocean cannot be seen by friend, foe or even its creator/
Not graphed, not reachable by raft, nor any elevator/

this was my favorite line in the whole thing...i think at times the wording was a little repeatative.....i have no idea what it's about...is it about being sperm?
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Old 06-03-03, 04:42 AM   #4
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^^lol... its not sperm... its very obvious what it is at the end... uppin
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Old 06-03-03, 06:13 AM   #5
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This was fucking ill mun, one of your best, Very dope, I enjoyed it to the full no doubt...Keep droppin gems dunny....
HAHAHHA LMAO At that kid..Sperm...What the fuck?? hahaha...

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Old 06-03-03, 07:58 AM   #6
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Fart Poop
Weak and wack
people dont pay to listen to bullshit!!!
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Old 06-03-03, 08:21 AM   #7
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^^kids mad cause he still does gangsta rap... obviously you are part of the 99% of this site... go to hotflowz.com or some stupid site like that... no room for you here...
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Old 06-03-03, 09:48 AM   #8
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lol... murda-glokk.. fuckin' kids..

I thought this was an' a'ight piece... the flow was a little off at places, it was too poetic for my tastes, but I'm thinkin' it's about your dreams, that or a near death experience, cause it seemed alot of past memories were flashing in and out of the piece.. deep, I liked it..
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Old 06-03-03, 10:17 AM   #9
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^^^someone actually read it!
its about past thoughts... the thoughts that sit in the back of your head and you never really ever think of... lol... hard to explain... but i had a dream and i was back in my past... all stuff shifted in the back of my brain just came bubbling out... ah well... congrats blunt!
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Old 06-03-03, 10:21 AM   #10
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i read this before....u know wher inspire.dope......
haha peeps think about it can u get the hidden message towrds this crew...
well inspire doesnt wanan call it that but it sounds like it to me.
dope dope dope....u should make a song with chorus n shit....
so it might have a chance of being in RB legends...........

herbs learn of this dude.,.......if u can understand it
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Old 06-03-03, 10:30 AM   #11
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^^^RB Legends? I'm Shure!
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Old 06-03-03, 10:41 AM   #12
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shit was gangsta i liked dat shit keep dem comin dawg.............................................. .................................................. .
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Old 06-03-03, 06:43 PM   #13
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^^^lol... nothin' gangsta about it... uppin
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Old 06-04-03, 02:47 AM   #14
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uppin...
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Old 06-04-03, 08:07 AM   #15
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uppin... homos
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