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.-.Marxism.-.
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My Ocean...
IP: FDE4 ECED
Too deep for 99% of ya'll... Guesses are welcome to as what this about...
Swimming in my ocean of doubts and insecurities/ Anchored to the bottom looking for puddles of purity/ Fish resemble past people, problems and predicaments/ Would swim away but apphrehended by lack of ligaments/ Holding onto a liferaft of alcohol and nicotine/ It's keeping me alive and killing my dream/ Who are you? I don't know me either/ Trying to stay awake, sniffin' the ether/ Masked people surround and drown me/ Hidden motivations while the unbound me/ Free at last, only to be chained up again/ Commotion in my ocean, lost another sick friend/ I would swim away but dive deeper in the depths/ Wish i brought a heater, so cold i can see my breath/ Hallucinations, seeing gas underwater, a dead father/ 26 Christian Martyrs, 14 Angry daughters, 1 motionless otter/ Its my ocean, I came to love it, came to call it my home/ Mythological creatures, special features, 100 watt speakers/ Pyrex Beakers, Shiny Beepers, Fallen Leaders, Chome heaters/ All these contained within my tiny ocean, free will erosion/ Easily influenced, angered, endangered, enhances the promotion/ This ocean cannot be seen by friend, foe or even its creator/ Not graphed, not reachable by raft, nor any elevator/ May seem shallow but the water runs deep/ deprivation of sleep, slaughtering of the meek, movie of the week/ To think such a place even existed, to think such a person could be uplifted/ To see the power every hour constantly being shifted/ Exclusive, only accessible by the "gifted"/ Wondering geographically where this entity lies and what it beholds/ It cannot be sold, for it is mine to keep/ The ocean surrounds my brain, only accessible in sleep/ You guess it yet? |
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IP: 3F86 829B
this shit is poetic and metaphorical!!!!!
i'm diggin it! |
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IP: 4CC1 040A
This ocean cannot be seen by friend, foe or even its creator/
Not graphed, not reachable by raft, nor any elevator/ this was my favorite line in the whole thing...i think at times the wording was a little repeatative.....i have no idea what it's about...is it about being sperm? |
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IP: 2B62 5F39
^^lol... its not sperm... its very obvious what it is at the end... uppin
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: 101D 26C3
This was fucking ill mun, one of your best, Very dope, I enjoyed it to the full no doubt...Keep droppin gems dunny....
HAHAHHA LMAO At that kid..Sperm...What the fuck?? hahaha... .............................Pz................... ............ |
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BANNED For Being A Dick Too
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IP: 5B8D 6D5D
Fart Poop
Weak and wack people dont pay to listen to bullshit!!! |
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: 2B62 5F39
^^kids mad cause he still does gangsta rap... obviously you are part of the 99% of this site... go to hotflowz.com or some stupid site like that... no room for you here...
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: A175 060F
lol... murda-glokk.. fuckin' kids..
I thought this was an' a'ight piece... the flow was a little off at places, it was too poetic for my tastes, but I'm thinkin' it's about your dreams, that or a near death experience, cause it seemed alot of past memories were flashing in and out of the piece.. deep, I liked it..
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IP: CD83 52C9
^^^someone actually read it!
its about past thoughts... the thoughts that sit in the back of your head and you never really ever think of... lol... hard to explain... but i had a dream and i was back in my past... all stuff shifted in the back of my brain just came bubbling out... ah well... congrats blunt! |
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IP: 1501 77A0
i read this before....u know wher inspire.dope......
haha peeps think about it can u get the hidden message towrds this crew... well inspire doesnt wanan call it that but it sounds like it to me. dope dope dope....u should make a song with chorus n shit.... so it might have a chance of being in RB legends........... herbs learn of this dude.,.......if u can understand it |
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IP: CD83 52C9
^^^RB Legends?
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IP: 4577 CD9A
shit was gangsta i liked dat shit keep dem comin dawg.............................................. .................................................. .
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IP: 2FBF A2F0
^^^lol... nothin' gangsta about it... uppin
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: 4B2D 6E5A
uppin...
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: 0A53 C473
uppin... homos
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