Reppin

May tha lord be with you,In this time of need/
i'ma sit back and chill and blaze some weed/
is it time to spit some rhymes or grab a book to read/
pick a fight and shoot a gun and make some niggas bleed/

i've chose and no thanks i'll stick to weed/
doin no harm to anybody or startin any dirty deeds/
Alls i wanna do is make some geees/
be greasy and cater to all or any of ma families needs/
I been in this rap game for days not years/
when westy on tha mic i puts an end to ya fears/
if you fuk wit me it gonna have to be tears/
coz i'll cut u and ya hole crew up wit ma shears/
wot westy lookin for in a ho' is titties an rears/
after i fuk a bitch gone have to break out tha beers/

Got all ma home boys sittin in ma nigga pothead petes/
smokin dope,tryna get some pussy,get tha bitches between tha sheets/
we measure a girls class on tha size of her teets/
it's no way to judge but alls we are is dirty cheats/
only things we do is smoke dro and make beats/
watch movies,wile out,then tha hole cycle repeats/

Chorus

we bad boys smokin to tha day that we fry/
we dirty,grimey alls we wanna do is get high/
if u was tha same u could never be as fly/
tha names west,reppin dundee till i die/

i'm reppin Dundee (uk) till tha very end/
if u don't know that u should spread it like butter to a friend/
when i break into tha game i got barriers ta bend/
a white rapper spittin tha truth tryin to amend and fix tha trend/

held down by tha kat named eminem/
got much tha same problems,same worries cept no need for a mack 10/
no one wants to see a white rapper that can spit aswell as black men/
i was listenin to rap and hip hop same as you way back when/
like nore"last album was an eight this one is a ten"

Chorus

we bad boys smokin to tha day that we fry/
we dirty,grimey alls we wanna do is get high/
if u was tha same u could never be as fly/
tha names west,reppin dundee till i die/

i'm reppin tha uk coz i feels we deserve respect/
nobody wanna hear or feel alls they wanna do is cash checks/
if you tryma take advantage i'ma gonna have to break ya knecks/
i start ma songs off wit ma man on tha decks,spit ma lyrics bust some rhymes then press ejects/
after that gettin critical acclaim and much respects/
got plenty more to spit got more game than tha jets/
i aint got beef so no need for death threats/
if i'm in a battle aint no need to place bets/
coz westy ballin like michael jordan bustin nets/

and if you don't respect me ya catchin blows to tha nose/
it'd be betta for you if you was a friend not a foe/
i rap for tha love of it not for tha money from tha shows/
if ya don't feel tha same ya gettin thrown out tha doors/

Chorus

we bad boys smokin to tha day that we fry/
we dirty,grimey alls we wanna do is get high/
if u was tha same u could never be as fly/
tha names west,reppin dundee till i die/

i'm a bad boy smokin till tha day that i fry/
i'm dirty,grimey alls i wanna do is get high/
if u was tha same u could still never be as fly/
tha names west,reppin dundee till i die!!!/

decent drop
drop that in audio and it should be hot

Deffinitly should be Hot on Audio yo............Nice shit and yea get bac at me cuz i got somehtin for you dawg

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uppin this for some more feedback.

PEACE

being a text-only as of now I wasnt all that thrilled reading this...

until I had a beat come on that fit this...

but yeah everyone is right
this should be a good audio piece

also hit my open mic up
"Street Prophecies"

i thought it was pretty decent, but tht last verse killed ya cuz the bars got signifigantly hsorter then in the rest of the song.... still pretty dope though
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51173

i read and i couldnt really feel it .....

this was pretty good dude...nice to see an open mic from another dude in Untouchables.
This had really short stanzas, and didn't go very deep, but as far as pieces like that go, it was pretty ill.
Like everyone said, it'd be better audio
One

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

it gonna be an audio peeps was jus wantin feedback on it before i went audio.

PEACE

Uppin this for some more feedback peeps.

PEACE

dude nice song, i hope you wright more like that, very ill i wish i could hear that with a phat beat as well. keep wrighting dog holla~

Yo thanx for tha feedback peeps.

PEACE

Good shit west...had plenty of wisecracks, metaphors...kept me reading, and I did feel this shit. Props.

i was feeling that west...it should flow really smoothly when you hit it up in audio...looking foward to it...ima a drop a piece later cuz i got things to do now...not like that bored provoked drop earlier.
overall:nuttin bad to say...smoked the joint