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Old 06-11-03, 03:40 AM   #1
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too much

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{chorus} x2
too much too much lord knows this ish is too much for me, niggas think i'm pussy ok nigga come and see, cause i'm gangsta(gangsta) nigga mess with me, cause i'm gangsta(gangsta) nigga mess with me,



too much to for me to see but this is no surprise, the devil must be controlling my eyes, i can't turn away from all the drama and lies, docter said he was surprised i was a prodigy to be a black baby boy, i don't know why cause a algebra book was my first toy, when everybody look at me other niggas taking up pornos for joy, niggas say it's hard to be like me to spit like me, crazed fans even want to try and shit like me, why they try to get like me, i've seen local fans and out of town ones to, how would you feel if niggas started actin like you, i aint got a lot to say but the little i do say pay, i'm usually a nice guy but today is a bad day, this my life/ my way/ my culture/ my shit, so much to go through for just a little bit, i've been fighting to save the shit i get, i'm new here but yall best not fuck with me because of that, cause i'm strong and rageful like a bull/ with agility of a cat, say what you want it probably won't me mad, wanna be like me naaaaa nigga you to late i'm already sad, what? you aint been listening,


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holla
yo that wasn't my best but i'm trying to find out what i'm missing it's that one thing i can't figure out so someone please tell me.
give me some constructive criticism.

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Old 06-11-03, 03:49 AM   #2
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Ok , You Need More Complex Ideas In It...
Like All Of Your Words Were Simple...
You Have To Make People Think...
For Your First Verse Here Its Alright...

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