10 lines no hate, Dick rydN, crew votes...Due tomarrow, you spit first

R-Dot-Capone lets go boy...I might be able to get it done tonight........................................... ....................................

So.................How long does it take to write 10 lines? Well, I'm sure ur skilled, I'll give you your time.....I might have to wait till tomarrow

Lyrically the best, u could spyt 'til u lose ur last breath/
U styll couldn't win. Give me 10 bars & i'll win w/ 8 left/
Flows lyke a dyke's pussy kid u know it's the tightest/
But ur shyt wouldn't be sick if ur feces had the SARS virus/
Jawbreaker style, pop a molar if u try and bite thys/
My words are too hard 4 u, break a wryst trying 2 wryte thys/
R-Dot spyts fyre lyke my tongue was shaped lyke a lyter/
U couldn't even win thys shyt if u hyred me as ur ghostwryter/
Verbally i'll eat u, so evilkronix don't push me/
Wait never mind, change that. Capone's allergic 2 pussies/

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... U better hope i don't remember ur name/
'Cause i'm dryvyn drunk hyttyn pedestryans on memory lane/

For starters, you betta watch ya-self son//
I might be forced to pull outta glok and *cap-one*// (Capone)

On uh piece of paper, I'ma *draw* a gun// (you draw a gun..then shoot)
Despite'cha luck, bud, you fatality numba one//

If you wanna try to keep fuckin' with me//
Mommy and Daddy are gunna make fatalitys two and three//

I look at my fists thinkin: I'ma beat you *with~these*// (with~these sounds like *with ease*)
Bitch, please, You know I'm not down with trailor park sleeze//

In bitch slapped, you were actin' all bad//
But even before the battle started..you were had//

Ahhh, wordplay....you gotta love it. Uppin for Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<>>>>>

imma go wit Evil on dis battle wit overall better wordplay punches and flow........peace

return the favor please:
vs teeny
vs rydogg
vs j-yo
vs g-code
vs elevated thought
vs emcee juggernaut

thanks man..........these battles are gettin slept on

vote=evil

I'm up one Keep the votes comein...I'll do same for you just tell me where........................UPPIN for votes

Im going to have ot go with R-Dot on this one. I mean Evil has some great play on words and the structure was great. The flow and lyrical stabs sort of blew though.

Even know I can't vote I am still putting my info in so you guys can know whats going on with your raps and stuff.

yo evil u didnt poll vote vs teeny....................peace

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Sorry man....I only have 40 some posts.....I left comments though.......Ying, C'mon.......You gotta be kiddin' me right? His punch lines we're okay. But anyone could do that, put some okay punch lines together. The thing is...that it involves NO skill. Thats what I used to do. Wordplay is what separates the boys from men. You have to be pretty slick to have good word-play.......But thanks for the comment...thats what made me realise how bad I sucked...(and most likely still not all that good) But I'm still just starting out UPPIN FOR VOTES

Uppin for votes......................^^^^^<<<<<>>>>><<<<<^^^^^............................................. .................................................. .................And read through the battle...but just the end of the lines..I wanna fair chance for both of us

please oh please....VOTE I'll do the same.............................................. .................................................. ..................

Vote on this shit and i'll come back with an honest vote:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55642