1st track well like three verses,usually freestyle but gettin into this writin shit.tell me sup,i know may b long wit 3 verse but please peep it.1

((Verse 1))
Im far from the greatest,hardly the latest kid to do this,but screw it/
everyone knew it when I came in I would be flamin, puttin my name in with those who made it/
Hate it to a different degree when they saw me/
Yall stars need a verse,call me,yall looked at me unlawfully like I hauled wit me the white race appaled to see mc's/
it was ya love me or hated me cause I balled for free/
They Mad cause they couldnt grasp Me when I spit nasty, shit IM not flashy so blast ya beats when you pass Me/
I'll rhyme clear or raspy, so when you hear me IM TOo crafty/
Lastltly,attempt to imitate,scared cause a kid intimidates stars who bent ON beef,Yall just mimic Hate/
Damn im on some next shit,wanna test it,Gimmie a minute in a clinic/
I'll spin it and have the place burst out,with the worst shit out they chest/
BEatin Hearts like a Fat Man who worked out with no rest,givin infants heart attacks and old people straps/
makin they old ass shoot craps in hoods, damn im good,I can hold peoples attention,yo did I mention,im white,damn you right/
you cant feel me now cause your not supposed to,well check it,you nice you nice,them other cats aint come close to me,iight/

((Verse 2))
Theyv'e been dropped, dissed,and forgotten/
Stopped bein hot and wound up rotten,since I got I been spotted in the makings of a star/
Its about what youv'e done,who gives a fuck who you are/
In the industry it can be hard,Theres cats with Plaques makin So called comebacks/
Ya got these So called gangstas who dont even know what guns pack/
In this Game they sound the same Ya pickin Names outta Hats and callin it Rap/
Fuck that, You get slapped for that sayin YOu Fat like crack and Pun back/
bein pushed to execute So I run back to my roots, expected to fire back but i dont shoot/
Its like i feel so loose, these people are already off me, oftently I seen cats who cant stop But Go Pop and its costly/
Thats why you wack and im not,just so hot the skills never lost me, When my Shit gives Kids fearless wills it Must kill you/
that you gotta sell out to sell like me,beggin Tell me How can I sell like Slim and Nelly, How can I be like that/
IIght Dog,put a doorag unda Your Hat and drink ya Pimp Juice black/
Im loosin patience, its ugly aint it, Its an invasion and Kids love it/
Why you hate it, Probably cause im too real with it, so deal with it, or take it to the grave, I got the fans, I just changed the game, its in my hands man/

((Verse 3))
Shit,I never understood, all these mc's challenge and step to me/
if they could they would, got the whole hood runnin up to me/
spit, come on spit, Yall know you cant fuck with me/
Luckily these pieces of shit run along and sit down,its broin puttin only hits out now/
everyone wonders how he does it,maybe he loves it so much He holds a Grudge when its not classic/
so let me hit,yall be gone in a minute,weavin through the traffic/
ya moms conceivin was way too tragic, it aint magic I already had it/
I'll keep it simple,take that Fake love to the Club, I dont need hate in my home/
I murdered it on My own wiht Old flows, the world knows I came into the Pros with no clothes/
Now im well grown today,just get outta my face with ya to weel known to say,oh im the hardest artist/
Man i spit regardless of money,cause im so hungry there always will be passion/
I came in there,Ripped it,Noone was askin what color I was/
It was the jealous Whites who held grudges on what color I was/
other than that its nothin but love, cause We bleed The same Blood/
Thats it, its time yall, that I speak of the truth to our troubled youth/
THere are no disputes,but mine yall,after all,theres no excused for steppin to me,I just thought I'd remind yall

This piece was Aight man....I was kinda feelin it......Could have been better though.....Up ur vocab..........
BEatin Hearts like a Fat Man who worked out with no rest
^^^^That Line was Ill........

THAT SHIT WAS HOT SINCERE AND I DON'T GIVE A FUCK WHAT COLOR YOU ARE BROTHA YOU COOL WIT ME. KEEP IT UP!!!

thanks for the replies yall,uppin this shit,sum critque yall.1

uppin.zz's