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These words i call my own
IP: FE8B 6CD9
This song is going to be ill with this beat
read the lyrics ill try to put the beat up later I feel the call, not to bare my arms but to hold my words I bare the charm of thought created from the wings of humming birds I let loose this profuse style of fighting capability I surrender to your demands but now you’ll listen willingly My own thoughts killing me at times when I was lost I’ve recreated pain Now I hold it to a pause A lost cause or just a empty canvas waiting I take the world inside my head and let it do the painting After 19 years of training answers seem to come and go The winds of time will change to hold the structure to the flow But down below, we can hide from weathers hold And fuse amongst ourselves where we break free from the mold Now I cant be told that what is right is never wrong The rules of life have changed in the words of simple song And as the day is long so will be the dreams i share I dare the god up there to listen to my silent prayer I break free from tempting snares that grope and grab with every step Ill stand to face the music speaking truth until my throat is strep Last edited by B(V)U$3 : 06-10-03 at 08:25 PM. |
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IP: EF67 0AC3
whatever man
u proved you can flow good for you, since i wanna put the silly nonsensical beef behind... str8 drop multies cuolda been upd.. kinda disapoited set up the end of the bar.. but still tight shit |
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IP: 297E 6735
^ pretty much what he said. Str8 drop.
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
Quote:
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
that is only like half of the first verse
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IP: C1DA C961
what everyone else said..................
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
wtf how about we get some real feelings
none of this he said she said |
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IP: 73B6 3631
okay. not good not bad..
average....
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[ Word for Word ]
Kevin. Alex. Patrick. John. |
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
well since its still young what should i do to it?
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IP: EDAF 43CC
Sorry but I didnt really like it........................
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
hmmmm
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IP: 897F D286
dog, multies,.. it just aint the style i personalyy like
but to some one who knows music and lyrics id say that the the problem is the set up to the end of a bar its like, u expect sumthin and thas the standard, but then its wacker then the werd u expected, unepected werds... whie u go for that uh.. new, pop up no-one-gunna-be-ready-for-=this flavor.. i was just let down by the end |
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
its not really the end its more of the midle
i need to finish it then u will see what i mean |
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