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Old 06-08-03, 06:33 PM   #1
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B.R.E prezents:Mind drug.....a little on the poetic side let me know what youthink

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the vision in my head was ethreal
so fake and real
luring me to provoke the unreal
it's making me hallucinate
like a drug or an addiction
that i hate
my brain is blurry causing pain that i anticipate
my thoughts begin to fade
trying to escape
like over my shoulder like a saint
causing nothing but pain
going insane
hard to tame this game that i play
memories suddenly happy but visionly scary
full of poetic theory
full of my lifes memory
wheres this talent i need to contain
wheres all the words that i can't explain
it makes me dizzy
my rhymes scattered there fizzy
constantly busy
inside my skull
waiting to release ready to pull
using a pen as an escaping tool
away from society
full of illusions variety
flowing away high above me
for all the world to see the true visions
all of my lifes execussions
blistered fingers turning lyrically abusive
never conclusive
my writings a sickness
my minds illness
my hands need to drain
my internal pain
leaving stains
across a paper
my own hands a thought raper
as if the grim reaper has taken my body and
left nothing but soul and words
it's absurd
how can a mind think so much
it's disturbed
my bodies concerned
cause still there is nothing that it's learned....
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Old 06-08-03, 07:02 PM   #2
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uppin don't sleep on this one
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Old 06-08-03, 08:03 PM   #3
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This was Nice....I really Liked it.........Uppin for my Fam
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Old 06-08-03, 08:06 PM   #4
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thank you Bash
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Old 06-08-03, 09:15 PM   #5
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this was good...

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i'm never gettin'
my meds' it seems...


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damn..
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Old 06-08-03, 09:27 PM   #6
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tight tight tight tight fam UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-08-03, 10:23 PM   #7
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Uppin for da Family
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Old 06-08-03, 10:37 PM   #8
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uhhh if i had three words to respond to this it would be
Mad Crazy Hot!!!!
this was ill
and nonetheless a bit of the poetry side, but combines both elements(rappin and Poetry) together to form an awesome drop...

uppin for Famz
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Old 06-08-03, 11:46 PM   #9
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Uppin
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Old 06-08-03, 11:50 PM   #10
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Not Bad
I weas feelin this a lil
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Old 06-09-03, 01:26 AM   #11
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thankz alot people
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Old 06-09-03, 01:02 PM   #12
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uppin this piece
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Old 06-09-03, 01:22 PM   #13
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Eviley...good shit right here...reppin for the Fam....I like this poet-rap...keep bangin
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Old 06-09-03, 05:08 PM   #14
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thanks fam......and for every compliment on here
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Old 06-09-03, 05:17 PM   #15
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yo, I was feelin' the poetic delivery to this.. 'cause if you had-a done it in bars it wouldn't've flowed at all.. all I gotta say is you're pro'lly hte most creative in BRE.. switchin' style on a constant an' shit.. I usually don't reply to your shit but trust I do read them..
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