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06-08-03, 06:33 PM | #1 | ||||||
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B.R.E prezents:Mind drug.....a little on the poetic side let me know what youthink
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the vision in my head was ethreal
so fake and real luring me to provoke the unreal it's making me hallucinate like a drug or an addiction that i hate my brain is blurry causing pain that i anticipate my thoughts begin to fade trying to escape like over my shoulder like a saint causing nothing but pain going insane hard to tame this game that i play memories suddenly happy but visionly scary full of poetic theory full of my lifes memory wheres this talent i need to contain wheres all the words that i can't explain it makes me dizzy my rhymes scattered there fizzy constantly busy inside my skull waiting to release ready to pull using a pen as an escaping tool away from society full of illusions variety flowing away high above me for all the world to see the true visions all of my lifes execussions blistered fingers turning lyrically abusive never conclusive my writings a sickness my minds illness my hands need to drain my internal pain leaving stains across a paper my own hands a thought raper as if the grim reaper has taken my body and left nothing but soul and words it's absurd how can a mind think so much it's disturbed my bodies concerned cause still there is nothing that it's learned.... |
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06-08-03, 07:02 PM | #2 | ||||||
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uppin don't sleep on this one
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06-08-03, 08:03 PM | #3 | |||||||
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This was Nice....I really Liked it.........Uppin for my Fam
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06-08-03, 08:06 PM | #4 | ||||||
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thank you Bash
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06-08-03, 09:15 PM | #5 | |||
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this was good...
.... i'm never gettin' my meds' it seems... .... damn..
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06-08-03, 09:27 PM | #6 | |||
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tight tight tight tight fam UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-08-03, 10:23 PM | #7 | |||||||
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Uppin for da Family
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06-08-03, 10:37 PM | #8 | ||||
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uhhh if i had three words to respond to this it would be
Mad Crazy Hot!!!! this was ill and nonetheless a bit of the poetry side, but combines both elements(rappin and Poetry) together to form an awesome drop... uppin for Famz
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06-08-03, 11:46 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Uppin
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06-08-03, 11:50 PM | #10 | |||||||
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Not Bad
I weas feelin this a lil |
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06-09-03, 01:26 AM | #11 | ||||||
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thankz alot people
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06-09-03, 01:02 PM | #12 | |||||||
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uppin this piece
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06-09-03, 01:22 PM | #13 | ||||||
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Eviley...good shit right here...reppin for the Fam....I like this poet-rap...keep bangin
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06-09-03, 05:08 PM | #14 | ||||||
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thanks fam......and for every compliment on here
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06-09-03, 05:17 PM | #15 | |||||||
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yo, I was feelin' the poetic delivery to this.. 'cause if you had-a done it in bars it wouldn't've flowed at all.. all I gotta say is you're pro'lly hte most creative in BRE.. switchin' style on a constant an' shit.. I usually don't reply to your shit but trust I do read them..
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