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Old 06-12-03, 03:38 PM   #1
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Define Illness

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My hits are connecting simaltaneously,
I'm direct and and got you rappin vainly/
Compare you to me...your corrupt i'm abrupt/
These are Lightning bolts i'm throwing,
You'll hault cuz i'm the overpower flowing/
Rhymes that are distinct n impact wit a genocide,
Finishing ona a note that prominent n alive/
I conquer n 'divide', i don't need to segregate opponents to 'survive',
i jus divide up the 'corpse', i only gotta knock ya 'fought' for it to 'wrought'/
I keep the treasury of fort knocks,
I wear expensively bought socks,(punch)
The price comes at yo life, if ya get me incites/
this heres an incite to my personality,
Bare fists punch wit you morrality,
I can't keep my sanity whether i can keep my vanity/
You'll die while loosing your virgintiy,
I'll kill you when your fucking with me/
Only to a man but if your a chick, i'ma vomit like stan infront of you to show ya i'm sick/
I battle wit rap...like i can define illness...me
Yo size contract...cuz rhymes are pressed...freshly/
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Old 06-13-03, 07:00 AM   #2
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uppin this
~1~
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Old 06-13-03, 11:16 AM   #3
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nothin' special.. was feelin' tha flow but not the lyrics, vocab was lacking, wordplay... there was some, but not anything to WOW over.. good still, but I don't know, I seen you do better..
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Old 06-13-03, 11:24 AM   #4
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appreciating the honesty. next tim ei got time to drop ima see if i can excell my shit.
~1~peace
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