Please stop telling people you're from Toronto. Its embarassing.

lemme see u do better u lil whore ...

cuz u cant even spell "toronto" wtf is torona?

We aren't even going to begin to talk about my spelling of Toronto.

I can do better than that. Out of everything i have ever heard that is by far the worst. So everyone can do better than that.

Let me break down why it sucked. Please read this. It will make you better if just not 'less worse'.



First of all this chorus is atrocious. You make you're voice sound horrible. If this was played at a club, i would say it is very likely that everyone would leave. Its simple, yes, but it sounds, well it sounds like you have a german accent or some shit.

Moving on. Your verse. You have very poor emphasis on your words and you're flow is umm.. non-existent. It basically sounds like you're talking. You have like 5 words in a bar. That isn't right.

oh... god i can't even listen to this anymore.

now lets get feedback from someone thats not a complete retard...

no but seriously... u gotta stop hatin kid

word......that was horrible...how about you clap a little harder next time so I don't have to hear you.......The flow was waaaaaayyyy to basic.just the same rhyme scheme....no multi's.....keep at it I guess.....

iight so i see u guyz aint feelin that one ... how bout "sick muthafucka"... u gotta love that one

Listen to these people man..They know what they're talking about, there was NO emotion, no flow, I really didn't wanna hear it...Turned it off pretty soon...Don't worry Keelo and Stylez, there are still plenty of dope people from the T haha...

..........Pz..........

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after hearin ur paparazzi remix..... im not even gonna take that as feedback... maybe its juss ur style or somethin i donno not feelin it... and i heard u stutter a couple times :S

dude this is a cock sucker song!!! What the fuck is this shit dude!! dont fucking try man.. god... OK WHO THE FUCK AM I??
im gonaa... make u clap.. through this song.. i cant rap... this rap is crap... yo i think i can make yo clap w/ this faggoty rap!! im so damn fat i shoved a dildo up mah ass!!!

u r a gay mother fucker!!!

lmao wtf is dis shit lol...dis dude aint rappin u sound high man....the chorus is shitty to lmao but ull get better i guess

iight.... im still tryin to figure out tha style that i wanna do for rap... im new to audio... so i guess clubish joints aint my thing... im juss tryin new stylez so dont hate

no xcuese for sucking so much cock though