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Old 06-15-03, 08:23 PM   #1
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da lyrical messiah???..yeah, right...i'm da Alpha wit no Omega

watch ya ass get "Blazed" wit multiple 'flamez thrown' at his tor-so/
with 4 blows{bars} of C-4 prose..he's blown out his poor soul$$
ya' 'forced' flowz get incinerated..skip-the-forensics/
you stricken-wit-SLIM-spitz.."anorexically speakin'"..{ya} dim wit$$
i'll shift-ya-appendix when calicos hit-you-ya-shins-split/
flippin'-ya-lid-quick in mid-drift..listen-ya-skin'z-drenched$$
with bodily fluids ranging from urine to blood plasma/
as 'dis thug-smash-ya bronchial passage wit "slug" asthma$$
my club-bash-ya' cranial structure wit savage 'crackz'/
check his ravaged cap{head} and call 9-11 to get his CABBAGE 'patch-ed'$$
and skull bandage wrapped..my damage lasts so keep ya' baggage packed/
for lavish lapz thru I.C.U. wards..my brandished rapz$$
inflict fatal wounds, massive brain trauma, and broken bones/
waLLy be smokin' 'clones' who "imitate art" thru spoken poems$$
crafted for 'joking zones'..ya' rap style'z ideal for BARNUM & BAILEY/
i'm harmin'-you-daily..GrYm HUSSEIN.. bOmbin' cats DAILY$$
the dominant-Chang-Lee..master Buddhist fist exponent/
when i twist-ya-colon with 'open palms' to split opponents$$
actions-fit-da-moment..so in wartime, i swing-da-baretta/
bullets sting-ya-sweater..leave ya team DEAD-er
with blood on y Sweater
whose spleen-was-severed in Colloquial battle arenas/
i'll shatter-ya-femur..morph to Fred Kreuger..splatter-you-DREAMERS$$
emphatical-swings-blur optical vision with 'impaired sight'/
like Lennox Lewis fightin' {haseem}Raqman..you weren't prepared right$$
these rare types of round-house Writes{rights} designed by vet-e-rans/
be swellin' chins of 'west coast' breeds devoid of MELANIN$$
you'll never win against da 'soul brother'..i'm James Brown/
takin' ya' "brand new bags" for "payback"..i blaze clowns$$
with INsane NOUNS dat RUN-ON sentences with VERBal tac-tics/
i murder bastards who clash wits with 'mashed' scripts$$
one of my last vic(tim)z who got his flesh branded in SHAGNETICS/
'dis fag'z fetish consists of gayz with bad credit$$
..middle-aged men who work at McDonald's streakin'-a-hoopty/
still live at home with momz in bunk-beds sleepin'-wit-Snoopy$$
i'm preachin'-da-truth-'B'..you symbolize every ho-mo/
change ya' sig from rap's finest to {frank}Sinatra, Lawrence{welk}, and {perry}Como-------i just dismantled ya' whole flow
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Old 06-16-03, 12:12 AM   #2
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Nice Piece Man
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Old 06-16-03, 09:48 AM   #3
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Uppn
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Old 06-16-03, 01:36 PM   #4
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aiight nice piece grym, it wasn't as long as your others but that ain't no trouble cuz your others take ages to read...good length...aiight vocab, not bad wordplay but the flow was extreme hot.
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Old 06-16-03, 02:04 PM   #5
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dats hot dawg
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Old 06-16-03, 02:52 PM   #6
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Thanks yo
uppn
10ne
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Old 06-16-03, 04:16 PM   #7
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nice drop
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Old 06-16-03, 04:17 PM   #8
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nice vocab, multies, and wordplay
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Old 06-16-03, 04:18 PM   #9
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Dude this was mad dope yo
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