....Fuck You....My Brother....

~I really Like This...I Put it to Audio and It Came Out Dope But I can't Upload it at the moment, It Will be Up Soon Though....Hopefully....Enjoy....~

You Wanna Step to Me, I See Stains On Those Feet…
Blood Drains from the prints left behind in ya defeat…
Petite Problems such as this Puzzle elite like Heart Beats…
Conflict between Mind, Feet, Histories and the Streets…
Kids Hide behind the shadows that reflect their whole past…
Memories are told fast, from the Histories stood to last…
Wit My Heritage in Imprisonment, Bars seen, yo, we livin it…
Cages confide the Charred ones Charging the Courts…
Worlds Collide in Changes, Females Fuck us Like Tax Rorts…
Assorted Variety Ecliptically together in Sports…
I reflect the Light with ma Cold, Deflect Sight when I’m Told…
These Hurdles, stop progressions to Lessons in Recession…
Treasons In Progression, Teachings Walk In Reverse…
New Breeds cheat fetus Evolve, Destined fo Early Hearse…
I Nurse the Nurtured, House the Housed and I give to the Poor…
Hate, Violence, Blood, Tears, FUCK IT! I DON’T ADORE!!!!…
When it Comes to Who it was, IT WAS YOU FOR SURE!!!!….

Nobody, Wants to Hear the Linguistic Ways Of You…
Nobody, Wants to See the Actions Made By You…
Nobody, Wants the Smell The Scent Of Your Presence…
Nobody, Wants to Touch the Skin of Yourself…
Brought Upon By No-One Else But the One in The Mirror…

Past Times Have Had me Thinking Will the Future Be the Same…
Will I Still Hold the Name that Brought Me Into This Game…
Questioning the Path Taken, The Foundations Rock Fame…
There Was a Second When I thought You Were Straight to be there…
When I was Near the End, Were You there to Care…
Blood Links, Dynasty Bonds and Family Ties…
In A Modern World don’t Seem Enough to Hold Off the Lies…
Feelings of Hatred and Sorrow Were Felt From My Crys…
Those Eyes I looked Into, Saw What Comes When Faith Dies…
Smiles Still Shone, Arrogance In A Sense…
Everytime I saw you, My heart Cringed At Ya Presence…
I Got the Blessins Of the Fam, Like I’m Jesus, They Ma Jews…
Once Again I Think To What It Coulda Been Without You…
These Footprints Seen Ahead Of Me, Am I Following Another?…
PLEASE, DON’T TELL ME, THESE WERE THE STEPS OF MY BROTHER!…

Nobody, Wants to Hear the Linguistic Ways Of You…
Nobody, Wants to See the Actions Made By You…
Nobody, Wants the Smell The Scent Of Your Presence…
Nobody, Wants to Touch the Skin of Yourself…
Brought Upon By No-One Else But the One in The Mirror…

..................................Pz.............. ..................

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the multies...metas....vocab.....flow.......was good
this piece is basically flawless.........
original topic......concept

i was lovin every bit..........

Yep same could not have said it better, defiantly a good fresh topic, good to hear it in audio peace

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Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

....Thunx fo the Luv...haha....Uppin....

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you damn nerd... i should pay more attention in english...

^^lol... nice piece...

the lines were good , good topic

however i wasent feelin the way the scheeme flip flopped

it was line 2,3,2,4,3,,2,4,2,3 i like it when the lines r even, but good stuf either way

addalso, i didnt like the way it was forced at times,

str8 drop, and please peep my new open mic "please dont sleep, i put alotta nuthin in this one"

^^^I never really Stick to a Straight Scheme, I don't think its necessary, Fuck that...Its definitely Structured well enough in my view...And It was Forced??? What are you talkin bout Mun??? haha....Uppin....

........Pz........

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