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06-17-03, 01:14 AM | #1 | ||||||
BANNED For Not Following F.L. Rules
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"CLOGGED THOUGHTS"...short, but i think i got my point across,needs critism
IP: 1BD5 13B2
internal dismissal of thoughts, stuck in a claught,my own prisoner/
can't escape,minds cleared like a crystal,insisten myself ta clench the pistol/ a fist-full of anger aimed in my angle,danglen off the rope like the jaws of an outraged pitbull/ stuck in a mystical reality thats got my mind crippled like christopher/ i twist-and-turn and still can't brake away from this shit-that-burns my insides maken me crouch till i miss-my-turn/ my stomaches churned ta the point that i aint even concerned with the pain that travels from head-ta-stern/ i pretend-ta-learn my lesson but continue ta mess-with drugs that sting when i ingest-them and burn my intestistines when i digest-and/ iv tried resten, waken up and seein if my chest dont sting after i rested,but its still there,i feel like theres no way ta correct it/ |
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06-17-03, 01:17 AM | #2 | |||||||
Banned For Biting
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IP: 8FD9 E665
Dude if ya keep free postin the
Mods WIll Bitch Like Assholes But rulez are Rulez Jus so ya know |
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06-17-03, 01:20 AM | #3 | ||||||
BANNED For Not Following F.L. Rules
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
oh..i didnt know that..whats u mean free posten???..i dont get it..im a newb?
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