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06-17-03, 06:00 PM | #1 | ||||||
BANNED For Not Following F.L. Rules
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cant think of a title..any suggestions???
IP: 1BD5 13B2
everyday someone is boastin and actin egotistical/
actin like theres not one care on this earth, that shits sophistical/ makin everything seem so great, fuck, be realistical/ no ones perfect,not the new era, and not the old and traditional/ not everyone gots talent in music, some people are arrhythmical/ no one can change what they hear,nor change our visuals/ what happens, happens, we cant change the past,we become realities prisoners/ if we choose ta be rude,or choose ta be spiritual or mystical/ thats our choice, but these choices later on become critical/ crutial to our being,thats why we gotta think for ourselves,be politically correct,litterally/ we gotta move away from the little-leauges and hit big time,get away from the bottom,and skip the littoral/ go straight ta the top, with our minds and souls, forget the fights and violence,forget being physical/ drop the pistols, and kiss the sky,just aim high and hit-the-notes,nothings imperceptible/ and fuck bein just exceptable, and never except-the-bullshit that comes with being hederosexual/ so many tasks and challenges,we cant vote on which ones ta recieve,our lives dont work like elections-yo/ we gotta sit back and except-the-blows, lettin our view points and perspectives-go/ out the window, everyone conceives everyones life ta be plain and domestical/ when problems enter hoaller out ur chest-and-roar,through the estival/ winds, our voices being heard these days seems ta be inevitable/ inconceivable, everything we seems seems like "hey, ive read-that-before"/ everythings becoming a bore and repetitive-bull/ so stupid and obnoxious u wanna knock-it out and make em so that their not repeatable/ everytime i see-a-soul fall in ta the gaps of life tribulations,i think "that cant be feasible"/ like cant they run away or sumtin,or give an excuse thats reasonable/ just ta excape being the scape goat, just backflip and sidle/ outta that situation, and run and stay away from the middle/ but they cant is what i see,there stuck and its pittaful/ |
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06-17-03, 06:04 PM | #2 | |||||||
BANNED For Being A Dick
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IP: E267 1347
Ohh
this had it's ups and downs overall descent Elevate 10ne |
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06-17-03, 11:18 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: B694 D469
Big Time Chaserz,
Nah was an aight piece man, just work on bitta organisation of ryhmes n it will be smooth n silky |
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06-18-03, 05:29 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 4937 BAA0
Whoa@The Rhyme Off Words...
Its Never A Good Idea To Do That... But The In Bar Multis Salvaged You In That Case.. Apart From That I Saw Nothing Wrong With It.. I Rather Liked It At Places..Although The Mental Flow Tended To Pick Up And Drop Off More Than I'd Have Liked It To... Stay Up Though And Keep 'Em Coming.... |
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