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Old 06-15-03, 08:42 AM   #1
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Look at my face cant you see the expression,
It the intense sadness and fuckin depression,
i feel this way not for fun,
but my life so far revolves around my gun,
but each bullet i fire sets another on the run,
I come her 2 express my point of view,
tell ya about the way life dont revolve around you,
I use 2 think it did but thats the thing,
if you only think of yourself then theres nothing to the world you bring,
people tell me i hav no point 2 life,
i will neva life normaly with kids and wife,
I choose the path and i walk it i shall,
even if i will neva marry a prity gal,
my life is hard but this is my release,
i believe in hate and war not love and peace,
so screw with me and out cums my AK-47,
each bullet it fires sends another fo 2 heaven,
u may not lik eme i dont fukin care,
b4 u cross me make sure u say a prayer,
im genuine thro and thro,
Im makin a big entrance and im here 2 renew,
The trash is out and im here 2 put a spark under you,
ill take you all on you and ur crew!
My lifes fuck up so ill fuckin warn ya,
Ill take it out on u im a fuckin killa.
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Old 06-15-03, 08:54 AM   #2
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Chorus:
Got the guts 2 challenge me but ill rip them out,
Leave u drenched in blood nothing left 2 say,
The intense pain will make you scream and shout,
U crossed me and ill ensure u pay,
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Old 06-15-03, 08:55 AM   #3
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2nd verse being work on.... Addin more depth 2 the feelin...

Wot you think so far?
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Old 06-15-03, 02:00 PM   #4
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i got 2nd verse cumin 2moro wot u peeps think or the first tho?

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Old 06-16-03, 06:50 AM   #5
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Theres a Rudimentary law of all rapping,
when renewers on stage u prepare 2 start clappin//
Im as robust, rollicking, and talented as they come,
wen im rappin u find it hard 2 get me of the rostrum//
my opponents retrograde as i spit at em,
i reduce u 2 nothing down to pauperism//
Im a capitalist i rule over you all,
do as i say or ill ensure ull take a fall//
Each word i say penetrates your skull,
u try to block them out but its inevitable//
Its breakin u down from inside outward,
ur fallin to your knees like a hopeless fukin drunkard//
My life aint been easy but this part is sweet,
i get brake a niggaz courage will listenin 2 a beat//
Theses words i say are extremely overwhelming,
i have 2 say them because im eviloding,
so at the end of this piece i am concluding//
some people exaggerate call me a fuking wigger,
listen 2 ya self no other words cud be thicker,
Im a white boy thro and thro,
I cudnt b any prouder//
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Old 06-16-03, 07:09 AM   #6
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SO PEEPS WOT U THINK??? NEED MORE? OR WOT?
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Old 06-16-03, 02:06 PM   #7
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it was iiight
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