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Just venting
IP:
My life, covered in a blanket of darkness, thought it found light
It spoke to me, to every word I hearkened, and held on tight I gave my advice, said what I thought was right, and it started getting bright I thought I'd been found, I was lost for so long, and missed out on so much Could never look down, cause I was at the bottom, couldn't feel the slightest touch Things started to change, started to look better, so I let the light have my kindness She took it all and wanted more, so I let her, she was treated like a princess After taking all I had, I lost her attention, she was there but not listening I started getting sad, no more nice things did I mention, I wondered what was happening It grew so cold, the light started moving away, and I started sinking again I tried to keep hold, but couldn't get her to stay, once again I lost a good friend This one is pretty lame compared to a lot of the people who post here, but I got what I wanted while putting it onto paper. If there's anyway I could get better I'd appreciate the advice. |
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