aight a dont kno if this will work but it worth one shot

Emotional Attachment...Fatal Attraction
Praying for a cure whilst dying...Searching for the answers
Wanting to kno what lifes about...Whislt holding lifes answers
Late for a big appointment...But holding on that bit longer

Sadistic Tendancies...Tender Loving Care
Things mounthing up in your life...But you dont care to share
Knowing that your dying...Whilst getting on with your life
Feeling inside that you are gay...But still searching for a bride

Having all the money in the world...But still living like a bum
You only in tenth grade still a young girl...But about to be a mom

Just won the lottery...but fail to recover your ticket
Became famous at an early age...but died trying to quit it

An employee in a candy store...But your on a diet
A clepto in a jewlers...Youd rather steal the shit than buy it

A blind driver
Deaf songwriter
A rap artist whos a biter
A plageristic Copywriter
A judge who hates the word justice
A king who dont kno what money is
Romeo without his Juliet

ironically speaking the happiest man alive is miserable...
And close to death...But he dont kno that yet


*BrAkE tHe FaItH*

People are sleeping on u these days , I dont know why , Anyways this Piece was Nice , it had a Nice concept to it , Ur Lines were Onpoint , U never Felled off.......

gets 15 IQ points

^^^for once, why don't you give some decent feedback!^^^

this piece was nice, i liked the vocab, the flow was tight. The first 2 stanza's were hott, also the bit at the end: A blind driver
Deaf songwriter
A rap artist whos a biter
A plageristic Copywriter
A judge who hates the word justice
A king who dont kno what money is
Romeo without his Juliet"

tight wordplay, good way to finsih it off....

Overall:8/10