Never again will I subject myself
to the pains of love,
to love and lose pains the heart more
than never loving ever can,
The ones who say its better
to love and lose
have not had it happen to them.
To suffer the pain of a thousand crucifixtions
can't compare to the pain I felt
at the loss of my love,
No thing,
or person in this world can prove me otherwise...
Until I have loved and lost again.

eh kid for ur first post (newb) it was tyte ... keep at it and u will shine @ BP poetic scriptcas....ya heard

return da fava kid - peep my shyt

holla

thanx man.

uppin'

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pretty simple...nice concept tho...the vocabs are need to be up a bit..the flow was alright but could work on it...

the message from ur piece is good...i liked it

keep droppin!

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^ I agree with what shiznit said.. This was pretty simple but you got your message across nicely. Love lost is never fun, but sometimes can be for the best... you never know where you will find your true love... (so if this poem is about you, keep your head up)

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nice drop, like shiznit said.

keep at it.

love hurts...that sux..but theres always a betta side..cheer up kid..*smiles*...lol...but nice piece here...gotta go..God bless..1..