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Old 06-21-03, 04:19 PM   #1
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Gang Units

IP: 8E7B AB33

crime scene investigation to a new breed of rap
im the top of anybody up for combat
i aint got a lisp, slur, or stutter
im xpelled with the hottest text i utter
the first thing that comes to mind
when im at rap battles posting every line
its unique and i can do anything you could
especially when them gang units move into ur hood

im out peace
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Old 06-21-03, 11:50 PM   #2
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Kinda short,
Not feeling it really cause im not into the gangsta rap,
Flow was so so, hard to get in some areas.


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Old 06-22-03, 12:06 AM   #3
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i wasnt feeling the flow and it was hard to get into it. Ya had a vew good vocab. Keep working at it
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Old 06-22-03, 07:33 AM   #4
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didn;t really catch the feel of this, you are tryin' to be too gangsta..i don't normally listen to gangsta rap, i only have 1 gangsta album, Dr.Dre's "Da Chronic",

make your shit a little longer, no point in posting shit about 8 lines long, catz won't be interested! Up your vocab!
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