this is my first free in awhile,i might by rusty it's shown in this,but feedback anyway.

fingers of angony rapp'in-sadness-they-sadden-me/
alladen-magic-your-majesty pull'in-grasses-llike-gravity/
laugh'in-fagots-don't-ravish-me laugh-at-fagots-and-Smash-their-teeth/
wackest-rapist-won't-challenge-me attack-his-masses-he's-lash'in-me/
capp'in-cats-into-casualties lack'in-stats-is-a-tragdey/
pack'in-caliba-magazines buildin-chaos-sporatically/
cats-couldn't-rap-worth-half-of-me you-spitt'in-flames-thats-blasphmey/
T-Delt-clapp'in-at-magot-cees backwards-blast'in-morality/
give'in-no-dap-I'm-ill-elite thats-why-tag-fags-aint-wack'in-me/
kum'in-sicker-than-plaque-on-teeth darkened-children-from-blackend-skeet/
caps-I'm-peal'in-like-tangerines hacks-will-prentend-that-they-slapp'in-me/
keep-all-seatbelts-unfastened-please bounce'in-ideas-like-tramplines/
jack-his-gatt-they-attack'in-me teeth-wit-no-dentist-gapp'in-me/
climatic-dramatics-take-action-I-spit-a-schematic-masterpiece/
slash'in-through-cabage-pacthes-and-clash'in-wit-trashes-rackets/
beware-of-anthrax-in-package-but-I'm-not-have'in-it-actually/
most-of-yall-wanna-battle-me in-cowboy-costumes-and-saddle-jeans/
beef'in-for-recent-reason-the-reaper-brings-anamalities/
realistic-fatalites realistic-reality/
simplistic-physics-ficticous-it's-vivd-orginality/
billistics-match-my statistic go-get-it-macth-the forensics/
dickless-snitches-in-the-distance-sitt'in-risk'in-wit-persistance/
hellistic-entrance-in-instances-trick'in-chikens-wit-innocense/
decsolent-devilish-descent-deep-dormant-techicalities/
purge'in-pitiful-pureification-prove-penicalities/
pout'in-pry'in-prizes-prove'in-penis-as-personalities/
uppin for feedback ~1~

Its Aight, But U Fucked Up Forcin' Multi's Too Much......... Some Of Ur Lines Don't Make Sense At All.......

^^^^WORD...... it is good multis..... but it sounds like a generic rap song.... makes no sense

It was good but the multi feel was a tad pushed. It seemed in spots that you over did it when you didnt need to, other where done well. So overall it was a good drop.

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everyone has told you it seems like you pushed your multis so i wont tell ya. Your drop was good and the flow was aiight. Some didnt make sense but over all it was hot

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this was good

Thats really creative, some stuff didnt make sense, but its a really cool concept

nice work

like everyone else said the multiez were nice but in some parts it soundz like you just threw some wordz that rhyme together without tryin' to make sense of it.