I've seen brighter days. Love is fleeting. Government is restricting. My own increativity is the ultimate muse. People hate me.

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Brighter Days

How much of my heart can be poured onto this page
How long can I write of my fight till I have come of age
How long will it take me to be released from this cage
Of wisdom of living of thriving for all of my days
If you were in my shoes then how would you tie them
With the velcro? Would you know? About how this goes
About how hard it is to create music and flows
To create like a god and not give in to temptation
Lifes turned to syndication and mere re-runs of masturbation
Salvation to me has become another word for violation
Violating my rights to masturbating and to fight
Not to party but to fight for my right to be a creature of the night
Battles raging on from here in America to Zion
A lion tears down and a burning bush only makes worse
The first to be put under an American Patriot curse
Every time I here that Bush speak I get the urge to burst
Not like an Alien but that even though I am failin
Ship once was sailin but it's going down and I'm bailin
Hailing down, dropping all my hopes and dreams
Hoping that someday maybe God will here my screams
And until that days comes I continue to shun guns
I continue to use the fist as weapon of choice, the only one
The only one I could ever trust or ever love
As I punch my way through life were others would push or shove
And as I push my way through the obtacle called existence
I can hear the singing voice of love calling in the distance
But from my position I'm wishing that I could just see
But I'm blind and I find that love is just another enemy

I've seen brighter days in a river bed
I've seen brighter days for those already dead
I've seen brighter days in a panhandlers cup
I've seen brighter days so just don't give up

I advertise my crys to the god up above
I despise what I devise, dramatized thoughts of love
Hoping maybe that theres a girl out there for me
But until that day comes I continue to be
I continue my perserverance despite my incoherance
I'll make another apperance despite any interferance
I'll continue to keep rapping despite any incidence
And I'll keep going on my own path despite any defiance
I'm the official sacrifical lamb spill blood for music
Even if it's artifical and superficial I still will use it
And I'll be what I'll be when I grow up we'll just see
Or if I'll just looking for good times in my memory

Open your eyes and analyze the artificialized rap disguise
I've been desimized and critisized, Terrorized and of course dispised
I've been puelverized and ostracised, Systemized by demise
I've been demoralized and dastardized, Dramatized and eulogize
I've been generalized and hypnotized, no one still could memorize
My music will never be on the rise, so I compramize and demonize
I revise my deal with the devil and get immortalize and idolized
I'm The Necromancer Atra Ludio Lord of the Flys

I've seen brighter days in a river bed
I've seen brighter days for those already dead
I've seen brighter days in a panhandlers cup
I've seen brighter days so just don't give up

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

good real good

Danke und aufwärts.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

nice real nice

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good to see your still writing...and now audio...i'd listen if i had a soundcard..

piece was good tho, expressed well..a hint of visual in there but not the usual kind..but i still got a picture in my head..attitude of it was nice..sad but true at some parts..especially talkin bout bush.good piece.

one love

all i can say is damn!.....that was nice...the audio was aight...

hmm...pretty interesting...i liked it!

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Don't know how i missed this Necroid...

...oh wait, it's cos i'm not as active as i should be. I apologise for that.

...but i'm half asleep, so aint gonna read/listen to it yet. Just replying so it goes into my control panel. To reply to tomorrow or saturday

As usual you come out nicely, I peeped the audio at first, in that response I see it moreso an lyrical attmept at this piece, less spoken wordish. The wording here also draws the same conclusions. Although the piece is laiden with beatuiful imagery and emotion, the 'chorus' if you will adds another emotion to this piece, though I wish you could have added more emotion to your piece, it was good.



favorite lines, nice piece man.

love..

This was quite amazing, Necro.

You see, i don't know too many people outside this 'circle' i once knew (dunt ask) that could write in such a personal way, using their dark side, yet not getting totally lost in it all. Instead, keeping a foot in what's going on/has gone on ...and exploring in that way...

I liked how it seemed to inter change from some very personal feeling as you describe your own inner pains n what not...then going on to your views of what's going on today, without loosing that personal touch...it always remained centred on yourself...and i mean that in a good way.

Then just floating effortlessly back onto more in depth and personal feelings..

..i especially like the end. How it built up with a kind of raw complexity...a great finale...

..i dunno, i got lost myself once or twice...it's hard to 'describe' such a piece...

..resp..

Das war, Riß wirklich gut. ich liebte den Inhalt.

die Weise, die Sie sie persönlich hielten, war Sie lose didnt alle
mögliche Gefühle das durch das gesamte Stück groß

Much love-

-ADD