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the wind burns, retribution howls for thoseself
DisMembered for no more or less that portrays bloody mess revenge rings your words desire to be heartfelt if so, why dont you use those finger tips to rip it out my chest lost to no fate my make be completly mistery like much ago same desires was to take a stand, so bold if words mark our lives, war was waged: furiously the king of heart of fires constant beatings left me so cold time now walks, unsatisfied it hunts for a kill no need to prepare battle sum set ups exist to end silent wars still take a stand without metaphors to shield if the day appears and i fade your still there baring the scars DisMembered a pen put in my mouth to write his wondering if a X in writing could be simply reached if it did thinking for a last spit there'd be no more life against all odds its terrifying worst left me DisMemebered as is |
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Though at times akward and at times a bit here and there..
it was still a piece of real intrigue. It had a slightly surreal feel to it. I don't know why, i mean i guess it could be cos i didn't dig into it too much. Instead just reading it as it is. The words and the imagery that went with it... ...i got some ideas to what it meant. But would you care to tell?? ..resp.. |
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um i got a feeling of anger and neglect of a person out of this piece. would u care to explain what it means? it doesnt really make sense. if a poem is complex one should still be able to pull a meaning from the piece. it seemed too mysterious, sorry but that's how i saw it.
could u peep some of my poems, thanks |
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