The Apex...aka...Zenith Of Depth...
Sentences Bless...Text...Till No Sin In It's Left...
The Mere...Sense Of A Breath...Purifies Thoughts...
Versed...Reverse Osmosis...Cleanses Your Heart...
Clenching Your Chest...Darkness Illuminates The Way Of The Blind...
Holding A Cane...To Walk The Narrow...Straight Of A Life...
The Innocence Of Babies That Die...Become Slaves In The Mind...
In Reincarnation...A Sheep...Exchanges Place With A Lion...
Saving Face Within Lies...On The Plate...Knowledge Ate With A Knife...
Wrists Cry...Red Tears Of Pain...Puddles Of Joy...
Fate's Sick Sense Of Humor...20 Years Of Waste...The Son Of A Boy...
Wilts In The Hands Of A Gun...Only Birth Given Is Death...
A Curse...Stamped On The Tongue...
The Shackles Of Fear Broken...Sitting Back As The Years Floating...
The Sound Of Bars Closing...Triggers...His Ears Open...
Screams...Of His pPeers Opus...Played In The Key...Of A Car...
To Conformity...We Steer Over...Leaving Our Mark...Like Rear Wheel Doughnuts...
Columbs Crumble...Gears Smoking...Prophets Mumble...
Metacarples...Tunnel...Thoughts...To Sea...The Light...
The Free Of Might...Right...Sips The Passion Fruit...Given By The Tree Of Life...
The Ability To Write...On Clouds...And Staple Them...3...To The Sky...

Wasn't Sure Whether To Put This In Open Mics Or n Here..So I Put It In Both..

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wow....the wordplay was amazing....i was like 'damn'..


i mean like every line had its own meaning and content..but u still made it appoint that it rhymes one way or another but this is more like a keystyle type ish...like u just type whats on ur mind and it goes from one thought to another....pretty interesting..more of like an open mic but can be a poetry too...

"Fate's Sick Sense Of Humor...20 Years Of Waste...The Son Of A Boy...
Wilts In The Hands Of A Gun...Only Birth Given Is Death..."

^^there's something interesting about these lines that amazed me...'only birth given is death' <---- impressive thoughts

"The Free Of Might...Right...Sips The Passion Fruit...Given By The Tree Of Life...
The Ability To Write...On Clouds...And Staple Them...3...To The Sky..."

....and of course the ending is definitely brilliant...i loved it


tight....and once again very good...

drop more!

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Uppin This..Pleez Stop Sleepin

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uppin..

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Uppin..Once Again

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STILL Gettin Slept On..

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Maybe it should be in open mic...but it's still poetry. So it's all good...

..it had some very nice imagery in it. Playing with the words well, though some words seemed out of place...overall it had a raw yet well executed feel to it...

...actually, quite powerful too...

..resp..