Marcianno vs BROOKLYN

Requirements:
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8 Lines Maximum !!!!
20 minutes to drop after I drop

Rules:
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No Bitin
No Feedin
No Bitching
No Building
No Countering
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
No Freeposting
No Vote Swaying
No Newbie Bullshit
No Default Vet Votes
* .:!4 Wins To Vote!:. *

Other:
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5 Consecutive Votes Is A K.O.
5 Total Votes Is A Defeat

Comments:
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OK, CHECK-IN AFTER YOUR 4 HOUR SCHEDULE & THEN I'LL DROP

aight...
im back brook..- checking in..

hey yall remember - NO DICK RYDING:_::
I KNOW THIS CAT'S GOOD BUT THIS IS A SERIOUS BATTLE::
TAKE UR TIME READING THE VERSE AND MAKE A SERIOUS VOTE::

check in and ready

mmm waiting...
im done with my verse.. since its no feeding i started writing some minutes ago-
so uppin for yours...
oh.. please drop in the next 30 mins since im going out..
thanks..

OH YOU BACK ALREADY?
4 HOURS WENT FAST, WELL CHECK IN OONCE MORE & I'LL DROP
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ready!
show me what u got..
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oh.. and can u please dont use bold letter or undeline or whit like that to make words stand out??..
thanks..

.:OPENER:.

I could of sworn Marciano's were cherries, when i called him out I was expected to wreck a peck of fresh picked berries/
you soft like pickin teddies, typin in capitols(capitals) wont make your rhyme stand out like people named Tina in BUENOS AIRES/(Argen-tina)

.:MAIN DISS:.

I'll grab ya mouth then grin, as I connect my air-force to ya chin/
scrape your sores with pens, then spray anthrax through your pores and skin/
look, herb, my nerves deserves some type a relief when i speak/
lets be brief..you still couldn't rip me even if John Q provided you with ‘beats’/-get it?

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look kid, its ok to get ripped, just take it as a com-pli-ment/
knock out your sockets with a roll of quarters at ya dome, until I realized I started knockin cents/(sense)



spelling correction**

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20 MINUTES IS UP MARC, EITHER YOU DROP WHAT YOU HAD OR I WITHDRAW MY VERSE
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enough is enough- its time to give this cat his third loss...

check it:}

.:OPENER:.
My lines enter ur respiratory, making it hard for u to breath. -Instantly causing u to shake involuntarily like Parkinson’s disease//
Fuck head on collisions, I’ll attack u in ur dreams and violently shove a microphone in ur throat, just to amplify ur screams//

.:MAIN DISS:.
I’d put gas in your mouth and light it and you still couldn’t spit-heat//
Slash your vocal chords and play instrumentals so you can say you rip-beats//
Commin through with a slew, of murder-related material, puttin anthrax, in your bowls of Lucky Charms cereal //
You’re always sucking on silicone titties, so you cant help but spit fake-lyrics. You say that your raising hell, but if you were an Exorcist ya couldn’t wake-spirits//


.:FINISHER:.
Your lyrics couldn’t raise eyebrows, if you used liposuction to suck-your-forehead//
i hope u've learned next time u will run amuck and hide under your bed, since my drop all you´ll do is duck-behind-threads//
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editing just to add an a to threds...

it had to be done....

uppin for votes......
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good battle homez, and good luck

NO DIRECT HITS OR PERSONALS?
WHAT HAPPEN?
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are u trying to sway vote?
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haha, look who is writing in capitals now??
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no freeposting bro..
just votes.
u need to tell me something.. PM me

VOTERS: read the rules..... u need 4 wins in order to vote..

and Feeble Minded.., about my flow... sometimes i flow with end rhymes...
but sometimes with internal rhymes. nah qhat i mean??... like rhyming a word in the midle of the sentence with the last word.. like in the Lucky Charms line...
so maybe thats why u didnt appreciate my flow that much

im not gonna vote as marcianno is in my crew...read it ne way thinkin it was gonna be a better battle than it was...yall both can do better ive seen better from yall it was tight just not ya usual...dont wanna sway votes by sain who i think won so i wont even say that much...

could have beee improvedon both sides...flowwas off in some parts for both yall know where it is probably..

not hatin yall just bored ad figured yll might want feedback...

Marcianno Gets My Vote

His hit harder and i felt it more, Brooklyns had some good stuff but didntl lake as much overall punch and flavour

My lines enter ur respiratory, making it hard for u to breath. -Instantly causing u to shake involuntarily like Parkinson’s disease//

You’re always sucking on silicone titties, so you cant help but spit fake-lyrics. You say that your raising hell, but if you were an Exorcist ya couldn’t wake-spirits//

They were dope lines, brooks closer was alright, but still not enough punch like marciannos

VOTE= MARCIANNO

stupid thing saying voting action cant be done?

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ill try lata