14 lines
no crew, hata yada yada
i must post within 20 minutes of this thread being posted and then him 20 minutes after my post...

this dude is a wack newb who says he needs to take the next step,
despite the gaping craters i leave in his brain his game still lacks depth
no respect for someone who wants an hour to prewrite a verse,
could give you 3 weeks and you still wouldnt have balls to hit hard like Nerf

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60442

since birth this fag has always been a loser,
i tried to type in Manic Killer in the "Ill MC Database" and got "Unknown user"
Manic is confused cause he heard RB is a gayporn site,
cats retarted...i saw him sucking on it cause he mistook a dick for the mic
god damn Killer your ill............sike!
youre too wack...couldnt elevate your verse if [/b]I[b} lent you some might
i know your verse is gonna be wack i shouldnt even bother to post,
you bring nothing to the table...your talent lacks here just like your votes!
i only got 12 lines and i need 14,
i dont need an ill finisher.....so umm.....your mean!

edited cause i cant figure out how to make the I in the 8th line bold....fuck

there you go.... lol....i started keying that 10 minutes ago so youd have a chance....good luck mayne

roughly 7 minutes mayne

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i' have 'rellevance' but theirs an extra r, can-u-see// (i 'r' 'rellevance')
insert in into 'he' and u got 'herb' missing-the-'b'//
simple, take it from the above 'b'ullshit u spat-at-me//
this battles mine, not for a second did it belong-to-'we'//
manic spreads panic as i produce a lyrical miracle,//
ur spits weak, the shit u speak - flows unclearly//
ur hits are nearly - not there, ur rhyming’s rare,//
i find u scared, with timing like a lost hare//
yo late, yo late, this battle was ur last mistake// ('im late im late' - rabbit/hare from alice in wonderland)
u irrelevant appearance brings shames, ur lines are lame,//
time to quit the rhyming game, we aint even quite the same,//
ur wacky shit has missed the aim, i hope ur mother takes the blame//
cos i dont wanna cop shit - for bein the one who left u in a muck//
people think ur top shit - but i just shown, ura herb outta luck//

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> sorry but i need to make this shit wider so as not to fuck up the formattin of my verse...

my vote goes to irrelevance..... better over all... although manic had some good multies.... good battle overall..... hard to decide but irrelevance came out on top in the end

where is our battle irrelevance? i been waiting for some time now and i still dont see it!?

open ur eyes up.... mehrrmm
neways thanx for the vote ill, ima poll urs up soon as i am a registered voter. uppin!!!!

my eyes are wide open..... ur verse was pretty wack compared to irr's.... open YOUR eyes..... damn dawg..... yoiu had ALOT of weak ass lines in there

aight aight no beef..... ima just leave it. thanx for the vote. peace man............................................... ......................

I Agree Wit Mental...Irrelevance Verse Was Aight Straight Through...Manic Ur Shit Started Off Good But Went Down Hill...
Both Had Aight Punches But Irr Had Better Flow...No Hate...

Vote - Irrelevance

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this wasn't as good as i thought is was gon' be cuz of irrelevance's recrod... but he still beat him wit better punches, the guy tried usin some wordplay but it didn't seem to work out all that ell
irrelevance had better punches n overall just better
hit up my battle wit an honest vote both of you

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60217

up....and my bad Ill this dude accepted at the same time you did.....ill post it now


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