I continue to gain interest and deminish all evidence of the torture you bring to my mind.

I'm sorry if you lied multiple times and expect me to stand right behind.

Until this day did I realise it was a crime to feel
Until this day did I realise it is you that gets the appeal.
Your not completely fake but only 1/4 real

what makes you think you can just steel?
Do i not shed tears or feel for fear?
Fear that your fables and stories are near?
or fear that your thoughts are generic? its simple...
This story is a loose toothe waiting to be popped out and i'll be doing the popping.

this isn't good.

you displayed little emotionsk
and your meanings were much
too abstract to even gather
anything from it. poetic maybe
but still not on a great level.
elevate, work on your flow and
get your points across better.
you have potential most def.

pz

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hows this.

This corona calms my nerves on a trip gone bad off 8 tabs.
People say i'm a bad kid for taking acid I say suck my dick and send 6 for drastic plastic, in the emergency room. Reason? an unlocked safety, maybe i'll be just like my mom and dad always perfect never wrong but internally sad because they have 4 kids and their sons done more drugs than they have.

^^ dont put stuff about suckin dick in a supposed to be 'deep flow'

its my poetry should be how i want it. and who said it was deep flow? put a fast beat to it and say it. sounds pretty damn good.