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Old 07-18-03, 04:46 AM   #1
Verbatim
That's Right...I'm White
 
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My 1st freestyle

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when you freestyle you gotta be quick
ain't got time to think up rhymes and shit
just say what comes to mind and who gives a fuck if it rhymes
and i don't really give a fuck if it makes any sense
cause i'm not trying to make it like 50 cent
so what if i'm white that's alright
i'm the one that made you girl not tight
go ahead and make fun of me cause of my skin
what are ya racist...what century you in
just because i'm white doesn't mean i can't rap
i'm not good i'll be the first to admit that
but i am better then some
i don't care if ya think i'm dumb
this shit right here is what i do when i'm bored
or when i wanna get shit off that i got stored
diss my ex girl, my friends or whatever i thinks best
i always come back, gettin shit of my chest
and i'll keep comin back till i'm no longer pissed
so the hell with everybody i'm done with this rhyme/diss
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Old 07-18-03, 12:24 PM   #2
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^ decent pieace..nice flow i'd say 5\10
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Old 07-18-03, 12:45 PM   #3
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HAD GREAT POTENTIAL TWIN UPPIN
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Old 07-18-03, 02:54 PM   #4
Verbatim
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thanks
keep uppin
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Old 07-18-03, 07:29 PM   #5
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yeah great potential...but i didnt like the 50 cent line...try to avoid using other peeps names unless its funny or youre dissing them
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