this is just a ruff draft, im still workin on it. i think im gonna call it Evolutions Conlusion.

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Evolutions Conlusion

This life is a warzone I journey through every passage/
political massive government speak for the masses/
with rancid language these punks are made outa plastic/
dolls so drastic robotic newscasters play the fascists/
now how we as humans are capable of so much corruption/
life consumption leaked for every word in its own destruction /
a fake function the president plays with a u.s seduction/
a lunch bin full of poor folk trapped but strapped for combustion/
we wont take it we wont let this madness happen/
attackin def to this country cut my ears for rappin/
strapped in for evil the rich are left anctuously naggin/
our lifes are a bad movie only with the closed caption/
iraq gets a new government but with no city to start with/
were heartless carvin souls out the administrations carnage/
cartilage blown on the screen how are we the new harness/
scarless america we love you but we cant keep our promise/
a democracy of post modern fools chose to plan our blueprint/
translucent ideas gets passed fast to the unholy cupids/
shooting arrows of propaganda to the everyday clueless/
treated as nuecuence we the population are painted as ruthless/
television for the violenty animated souls with no ambition/
missions for the new cliche. the public hears.. the industrys never listen/

HooK:
lay me down to sleep as america drains my lifes illusion/
this is what we have built a country with to many conclusions/
a destruction of the population with home made atomic fusions
the monkeys created it now were here to kill the evolution../

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