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01-31-04, 07:21 AM
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Travel in Time
IP: F127 8F9A
Dynasty Soldiers Presents: Travel in Time Time goes fast when your in bad times, to get through the pain you gotta commit crimes, sit on the street corner and collect dimes, work your ass off all day and end up breakin ur spine Day 1
As I first discover the person within me, I say it to you clearly that I am to be, when Im traveling through this time I go through emotions my body will never stop travelin cuz I am in motion, keep traveling through land and oceans, then I stop and take a rest for the next day, I kneel down to my bed and start to pray. Time speeds up and its goin too fast, you dont have enough time to look back at da past, and think about if your ever gonna last, I have to take my life back then and my life now to contrast, all the time begins to become vast. Day 2
I wake up from bed just to find that I lost my rhymes in my head, losing the hope in my life is what I dread the most,instead of flying coast to coast to find them , I just die down and become a ghost, because the hope of traveling that far begins to condemn, if i kept those rhymes they would have been gem.,,,,,,, the rhymes travel miles and miles way to far away, I keep praying that they would come back and stay some day. Never know when the time will end,
taking time and soul and start to blend, people talking `bout stealin and I start to defend, this time is even worse then last time,so I begin to curse about my last rhyme. Day 3 the final day
This has been a long journey through time, I couldnt see that I was getting there, I must be blind, now I pass by it and I cant deny it,cuz it is true, it was tough times in my view,but then I capture it, I take them and I sit, just to think about all the shit, ive been through was giving me a fit, but all along it was ranked in whit, I capture the rhymes that once ran away from me,just to find out that everyone could see that they belonged to me and I had them with glee, I`m done and now I feel free to all that are living to be. Times Go fast Times Go fast Times Go fast Times Go fast Times Go fast PEACE
Feed back please Last edited by Unknown Skillz : 01-31-04 at 07:47 AM. Reason: I messed up |
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01-31-04, 10:01 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: C1DA C961
this is actullay pretty decent...surprised that it came from you(since your crew is???..J/K)I'm impressed!,you have improved drastically..keep up the good work!
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01-31-04, 08:05 PM
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IP: F127 8F9A
Thanks Pen........................I really like all of your Open Mics and ur my favorite Open Mic`r
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