Crazy E where have you been ?
We missed your technician wheeling the Slim Jim
... Your moves on the playground
and the way you pass the Blunts around

Where did you go ? Were you in the pen bro ?
Leading the center ring ....
How longs it been since you bailed Sing-Sing
Your nuts man' I remember you kicked so many buts in the can
Beat up a security guard and sliced his hand
with a peice of glass / before you stomped his ass/ Some More
Kicked him in the head when he was on the floor
Your Cold man ..."King of Can" thats CrazyE's claim
"Boss of the Cellblock" thats CrazyE's name

He's done his time , drugs , murder ,nickels and dimes -
And BULLSHIT , thats what it is when your busted for a blunthit
Lock you up for no reason , tell you its for treason ... Why ?
They want to shoot CrazyE out of the sky
and lock him up quick .................

(CrazyE)
And you know it makes me sick ... Cause Im for Real
I can't help that I show the way I feel - with aggression
I play the game with a Smith and Wesson
I play to WIN , I'll slit your throat before you can call Gin
You can't beat me , don't you know Im the Big Cheese
Everyone listens to E .......
I am the best of the Killers , the top dope dealer ....
The CRAZY GODZILLA......
KING OF CAN , BOSS OF THE CELLBLOCK

You got to understand ,
you got to kiss my ass as soon as you get in
Or you DIE , it don't matter to me , Ten years Im gonna fry
I got no conscience , I'll kill you , I'll burn ya
I'll go eat potato chips
In the pen , that how it works

CRAZY E RIOT ...... GO BERSERK
GO CRAZY , GO CRAZY , GO CRAZY E .....
GO CRAZY , GO CRAZY , GO CRAZY E .....

kING OF THE CAN ...........G

Yo man , How about some advice or critique. I've been out of the game for awhile , I could use the humility.

okay, well here we go.
I liked the style of this. I liked how you had people introducing you, almost looked like a collab by yourself...does that make sense?
well, you need better content. I doubt you're actually a boss of the cellblock, so you need to stop frontin. Just write a piece that has a deeper meaning, and add in some words that make it sound better. Vocab, my man.
Your flow was okay, but a good way to maintain flow (doesn't always work) is keeping all your lines with the same, or close to the same amount of syllables.
Multies aren't necessary, but they can add to it. A multi is rhyming more than one word. It can make your rhymes look and sound better.
Try'n elevate.
Peace

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