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Old 06-30-03, 04:34 PM   #1
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Scholastic aptitude test.

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scholastically speakin
I've mastered the teachins
of rap in a weekend!
while you faggit mc's is
out laughin at recess
I'm in the lab wit da precepts
handed to grandmaster CAZ from lord jesus
draftin my thesis
on what happened to tethys.
each sentence completed
flows so fluidly half of yall get left seasick
I paint pictures so scenic
my spit comes embedded in beaches
bitch, I'll batter you speachless
shatter yah features
then scatter the pieces
cause Raze is in fact a rappin elitis
attackin the beat wit more traction then cleats get.
I admit that i'm an ass but more then that i'm concieted
so call me the elohim, cause the fact that i'm god is no secret
I don't give a fuck you can call me yahweh
or whatever you want pa
and if yah muslim go head and say it!
ALLAH HU AKBAR! (God is great!)
I'm a fukin moster
the conductor of this hip hop opera
fuck da DATs I record my lyrics on the god damned doppler
now fuck the rap n let the boom bap just rock yah...

LOL I'm just fuckin around, yo get at me wit negative n positve responses and point out any major or minute flaws that you spot, n be clear wit yah critique especially if it's negative, no dick head shyt muha fukas.

Peace 1.

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Old 06-30-03, 04:40 PM   #2
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This Was Aiight...It Had Short Bars n The Vocab Wasn't That Good But It Was Still Alright Keep Flowin Mayne..

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Old 07-01-03, 11:02 AM   #3
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aiight kid thanks for the response, thats my style tho short bars.
as far as the vocab goes i meant to keep it simple, n concentrate on the flow, but whatever.

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