Rules~

14 lines ~~~ 7 bars
no feeding
no freepostin before both verses

i'l start keyin up now...

.::Opener::.

This battle... I'l disperse it with verse spit, "kick your ass" and "hurt - shit",
Like walkin' through "Tombs" screamin' profanity your style is doomed with "rhyming curses"//

.::Main body::.

Il remove your "blood" and "fuck u up" like a pervert for your wack~sound,
I can't be seen like Michael Jackson standin' next to a themed white back~ground/

You "shook" from my "shots" of flows like exposed parkinsons disease needles,
Keep "Cumin harder" il see you "killed" so many times its like you "fuckin'" the kid who sees "dead people"/ (6th sense)

I "spit heat" out my "mouth" that shoot through your "rotten t(r)-ooth" make you lay~in~"choppers",(type of tooth)
Couldn't kick a "tight verse" if you held a "bible" with "spandex" playing~"Soccer"/

Its a Shame that as far as the rap game, everybody in your crew is better~than~you,
Il "remove your skull" and send you to "china" to leave you "open mindedly" headin~for~"doom"/ (china - sars)

.::END IT::.

FAGGOTTTTTTT.....

This faggot's record will "fall short" like sky divin midgets.....Oh sorry no, you~aint~a~fag,
But "youngblood" aint a rapper, he a "youngbitch".... jus don't know what to do~with~the~"pad"//

Your Up....

*Edited to correct spelling mistakes*

nice verse


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*I DID SAY NO FREEPOSTIN'*

But where are you? uppin so you can see the battle

*no more freepostin*
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I carve-kids into large-margins like im heart-less...blow you apart-quick and stop your
heart-ticks...why'd you start shit?//i got you shook like earth-quakes when the earth-
shakes, readin my verse is like feelin burst-spray, laughin while watchin this herb-
pray//Acknowledge the logic, the contents of my shit is probably toxic...this cock-is the
next curious faggots constant sodomy-project//im truely stealth...when you see blood-
HIDE-till-you-LOSE-YOURSELF!cz believe i'm comin through...simply to REDUCE-your-
health!//you heard-this..this herb's verse is shit..simply worth-less, if your walls-could
talk they'd cop-a-squat and then collapse on purpose!!//when i spit shit believe i quickly split-ribs, but i admit-this bitches lyrics n flow
is young and demented like sick kids//i'm man-handling this wack kat as fast as
relapsed-glancing..im advancing~//when this faggots spittin he wouldn't have ryhthem if
he was lap-dancing//yes..im disturbed..listen-herb while i rip-his-words..this faggot
is gettin fucked worse than a PRISON-NURSE!!!!

Y DONT PPL STIK 2 THE RULES!!!!!

DELETE 2 BARS PLEASE U CAME WITH 9 BARS... I SED 7 MAX


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yea but i came with 14 lines aight, so fuck it it dont matter its kinda hard when you in a hurry damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I GOTTA GO WITH 2003 SOLDIER, HIS VERSE WAS MORE PERSONAL & PUNCHES WERE CREATIVE, YOUNGBLOOD DID A GOOD JOB BUT THE ONLY THING I FELT WAS HIS FLOW & WORDPLAY A LITTLE MORE
IT JUST WASN'T ENOUGH TO GET MY VOTE

HIT THIS UP WITH A FAIR VOTE:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62337

LOOK KIDDO..... THE RULES SAID 7 BARS MAX... SO EDIT YOUR SHIT NOW OR BE DISQUALIFIED

ITS UP TO YOU......

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VOTE - 2003

REASON - His werdplay wuz off tha chain...good punches from both of ya but it wuz 2003's werdplay that took dis..

^^good battle
i'll poll my vote inna sec
PEACE

aight how do i edit 2 lines, thats all i got to edit right, so how do i do it and i will!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aight there i deleted 2 linez.....................HAPPY................... ........

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very.......... UPPIN#1
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