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Old 06-29-03, 12:10 AM   #1
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Back Off (quick rap i put togehter)

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Check it out, i'm gonna record it sometime soon, I have written about 20 of these quick verses so I might record them all, anyways please rate it (taken me about 20 minutes to write)


shut ya fuckin mouth, i will have you killed
do it professionally with no blood spilled
i'm dedicated to rapping, dedicated to shootin'
dedicated to killin and river pollutin'
gimmie that toxic shit, put it in the system
poisening so many people i cant even list um'
there familys will be next, dont you think i missed um'
those dead bodys were so cute, i could of kissed um'
i piss on people in the street, till there fuckin' sockin'
give them food, they eat it quick and start chokin'
this is my sence of humour, i'm only jokin
but i say this shit to get you fucked up when your smokin
once i had a party, turned into a fight
everyone was drinkin vodka, and snakebite
the guys in my room got paraletic that night
someone puked on my face, right in my eyesight
i used my fingers to remove the sick from my eyes
woke up everyone by stabbing a knife in there thies
i got a cold spoon, and gorged out there eyes
dont worry your in safe hands, nahh i'm tellin lies
now they can't see or walk, so there crawling along
i kick um' about a bit, while humming a song
do-da-de, do-da-dul
you should be in the fuckin hospital
but your not gonna be there, cause i'm keeping you here
call it a hostage situation or summin more supear
i'm stickin' dinomight, up ya ass, ya rear
blowing you up so fast it's like you just dissapear
you can still hear but ya ear, will be 30 meters away
drag ya body along, collect ya legs another day
dont be sad, it's not all bad, be glad you got a dad
well atually replace the word "got", with "had"
cause i knocked his head off with a shovel, in his own pad
i looked at his dead face, it was kinda mad
blood went everywhere, all over my clothes
this got me mad so i chopped off, a few of his toes
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Old 06-29-03, 12:13 AM   #2
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this was aiiight...you had some multies...but seeing that you a Englishman (no offense) I don't think that you would actually do any of the shit you typed about so that just presents you as a fake thug. Who knows though you could actually be capable of some shit like this...I been known to write a couple of horrorcore rhymez...

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Old 06-29-03, 12:19 AM   #3
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oh yeah I just remembered that movie "Snatch" I take that last line back...British people are gangsta
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Old 06-29-03, 12:25 AM   #4
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haha, yeh. I wouldn't kill no one under a dumb situation like in this rap, i mean for throwing up on ma face, lol
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Old 06-29-03, 12:48 AM   #5
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try ta keep the shit relevant and real yeah?!
if you rap about killing people, and its shit you wouldnt do then people gona say you a fake and all that crap.
But if it the true shit that u feel then rip it!
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Old 06-29-03, 03:48 AM   #6
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when I spit about that shit it's usually cause I'm pissed (which is a lot) and when I'm pissed I do tend to get a little violent sometimes...but Istill don't hit girls and animalz
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Old 07-02-03, 01:45 PM   #7
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HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA AH HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

" iDON'T HIT ANIMALS"

You sounde kinda pussy when you said that no offense
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