aight here we go. no more than 10 linez. lets see who gets their first win

My raps come swifter than the night, leaving u in shock
This ‘patient’ thinks he can win, I think he needs a doc
Deadlier than a virus that has entered ur membrane
Ate away all ur vital organs, leaving u in pain
Im as fast as a viper, a ‘car’ that never parks
I see ur fearin me so bad u left me a ‘skidmark’
Serenating u in poisen, come to take away ur pride
As soon as I walk in, ur fuckin rap career died
Im just the reepers shadow, u never ever new-me
u cant b sick cuz theirs only 1 illpatient, recognize this truly

aiight yo checkin in


yo what u thinkin accepting my challange imma lyriclay kill this nigga//
cause u no that im mothafuckin bigga//

when u step up to take me on its like u fighting a big ass dragon//
u showld stop screwin round kid and get back in ur lil red wagon//

u think u a big shot, hell no, u aint nothin but a lil dot in my lyrical murdered chart//
u such a poor nigga u dont even have enough money to shop for clearence at wal-mart//

u aint worth a piece of shit to me so stop actin all gangster near me//
y dont u get ur hick ass back to the poor section or Tennessee//

uppin 4 votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

this battle was pretty dry
but feel Rappaben 1 won this
rappaben came harder, just a better verse
illpatient sorry, but I don't think u can beat n e 1 with that
u need to step up ur game dawg
vote=Rappaben1

r u shittin me? wit lines like 'go back in ur lil red wagon?' this is bullshit. ooh well thanx for votin.. uppin upppin uppin

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VET SPEAKING:

Illpatient took this with better and harder punches...

That skidmark line was nice...

Ya'll both elementary, but that's to be expected from newbs...

Rapaben: reason for this loss...
"yo what u thinkin accepting my challange imma lyriclay kill this nigga//
cause u no that im mothafuckin bigga"

Weak Opener...

"u aint worth a piece of shit to me so stop actin all gangster near me//
y dont u get ur hick ass back to the poor section or Tennessee"

Closer that didn't make sense...

I checked his profile and unless I missed something your opponent isn't from Tennessee.

Personals help make battles...
When ya get them wrong, it hurts you more than them.

My two cents!

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yo thanx for the shout out. maybe when i up my skillz some more i'll take u on. well keep it real dawg. peace easy
Illpatient

*cuz no one's sicker than this illpatient

Illpatient got my vote or what will soon be after 3 more posts w/ better punches and i like the flow the viper skidmark line was nice both y'all keep it real later come hit me up on my battle w/ mctuffles peace


peace




amp

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yo no hard feelins rappaben. i just took ya. maybe we'll meet again. peace easy

*cuz no one's sicker than this illpatient

if i could vote i would vote for patient his verse made more sense
i agree with the vet's advice
rappaben1 your opener was weak
and it was kinda hard to follow
dont take it personal, do what i do and battle against vet's and read other people shit to get an idea of what gets you votes
good luck to though, ok battle
i'm new my self so i know how it feels to be a newbie

yo c-rob. when ya get up to 100 make sure you come back and officially vote on this battle. peace easy

*cuz no one's sicker than this illpatient

PS:thanx for the vote

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