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07-02-03, 12:29 AM
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Real Life
IP: AED3 16C8
[Intro]
(Gangsta One): "Yo... This is the realist' and illest shit dawg...this ain' no pussy white-boy shit...this is real life..." [Chrous] Real life... Guns, Gangstas, and Hoes... Real life... Where life will take you...who knows..? Real life... Yo, think 'bout it when you take some time... Real life... Listen to this shi', and vibe... [Verse 1] Yo, I'm gonna keep this shi' for real// I don' give a fuck, how ya'll niggas feel// When I'm hittin' them clubs with them hoes// One night, get drunk, One night, get high...who knows?// <Inhaling> Well, my night life may be a regular superstars life// But during the day, I got' to keep shi' real with my wife// I guess you could say life has been good...// At least, for a nigga who grew up in the 'Hood...// <Gun shot> I'm rich now, from sellin' records and producin'// My pimpin' days are now long over, I've quit shootin'// Real life used to be suriviven'// A day-to-day routine was to prevent yourself from dyin'// Real life was facin' the fact that you or your loved ones could get shot// <"Agh!"> Ma niggas and I were all wanted, we were all hot// A normal day's events: Run, hide, duck...// A normal night's events: Smoke weed, drink, we don't give a fuck// Ya, I still got beef with some niggas...// Some show up one my doorstep...fuck them niggas...// Yo, dawg...24/7 in the 'Hood: Strife// Yo, dawg...This is real life...// [ChorusX2] [Verse 2] Yo. back in the day, I was always the hottest man// All the bithes who walked by, be like: "Damn!"// <"That nigga is hot..."> But, in the 'Hood, somebody always wanted that nigga// Always wanted to pop that nigga// Always wanted to fuck that nigga// Always wanted to push that nigga...// <"Fuck u doin, boy!?"> Well, whoever was there for you in the 'Hood, ain' there// Whateva's fair in the 'Hood, ain' fair// Whateva nigga's good to you, nice and clean// Ain' the fuckin man he is, he's dirty and mean// At midnight, all you can hear is screams// Of bitches gettin' raped, or some man getting what he dreams// Well, the Game's over now, at least for me...// I can just sit back and watch, and we'll see...// You can ask any other rap master// Though, they may tell it a lot faster// DMX, 50-Cent, Dr.Dre...// They all have the same shit, to share, to say...// [ChorusX2] [Outro] (Gangsta One): "Now that is what real life is...or at least what it used to be...but now...who the fuck knows about now..?" |
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07-02-03, 01:07 AM
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IP: BE1A F946
hot shit man
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07-02-03, 02:25 AM
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BANNED For Being An Idiot
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IP: AED3 16C8
WOW! Damn, dawg, you got some skillz!!
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07-02-03, 11:09 PM
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IP: AED3 16C8
Yo, I need some feedback! Don' leave me hangin'!
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07-02-03, 11:35 PM
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IP: 1963 2F53
Yo man that was pretty sikk. Ill give it 8.5 / 10 on my scale...i like the flow and the chorus is real good...but im loving the flow...for some that is real life, which really puts it in perspective...sick shit.
peace |
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07-02-03, 11:50 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
ok, playa all those ^^replies are all new-bs let me give you some veteran input....it would make a nice audio, but not a text...
text usually need a topic lines like this: Yo, I'm gonna keep this shi' for real// I don' give a fuck, how ya'll niggas feel// dont fly with vets not the best, it would be nice in audio but ya need to up everything especially vocab score: 4.5/10 ~1~ |
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07-03-03, 03:03 AM
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IP: 399E F0FD
Pretty tight shit man. Keep ya game up.
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07-03-03, 06:20 AM
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IP: AED3 16C8
FEEDBACK DAWGZ!!!!
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07-03-03, 12:53 PM
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IP: C45E 878B
that was pretty ill
but i got way bettter if u want some practice yoh lets freestyle |
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07-03-03, 12:58 PM
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Shadow Boxing
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IP: 6654 0BBD
First Off, I Would Like to Say Nothing About This Was Real Life. . .
This Was A Material Life Developed In Content Of Main Stream Hip Hop, Nothing Was Real Quite Frankly. Content Was Extremely Basic & Played. . Topic was horribly Played, I've Seen It Done A Million Times, & Only A Few Have Came Nice With It .. Flow Was Weak, Nothing Stood Out, Weak Peice, I Give It A 2.
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Authentik Intelligence, ` Nuff Said. Last edited by Jae Cyph : 07-03-03 at 01:05 PM. |
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07-03-03, 01:00 PM
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IP: 954A E2C5
I'll give you 7/10 cuz' sometimes the flow was gone, and sometimes when the flow was there the text ain't shit...
but it's pretty hot... you certainly got skills you just gotta keep it movin' and work on it!!! peace... |
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07-03-03, 01:04 PM
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Shadow Boxing
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IP: 6654 0BBD
Oh, And Did I Mention,
Quote:
Of Course It's Not, It's Some Fake Elementary Shit.
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Authentik Intelligence, ` Nuff Said. |
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07-03-03, 01:40 PM
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IP: 9BD2 F24F
that was nice dawg
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07-03-03, 02:32 PM
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EVERYBODY HATES ME
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IP: 071B C042
that was awesome
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07-03-03, 04:33 PM
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Ya Mama's Favorite
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IP: 5AC6 C42F
Yo I see where you coming from with this my nigga, and you got a flow to your drop that would prolly be felt the most in audo, it's hard tryin to transfer something like that into text....And Imma tell you right now...alot of cats on here not gonna be on your level of subect matter here on rapbattles...I know from experience and what is dope in the stretts in somehow "Played out" or non creative on this site..I'm just lettin' you know, dirty
But I like this for what it was, keep writing and trying to get better. And it's up to you if you wanna adjust your style to fit the difference betweet street rappin and internet rappin', yaknow |
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