goes to Jay-Z's "Meet The Parents" beat

Lookin outside my window each day//
realizin, it ain't have to go down this way//
Another baby born is another baby lost/
they have no value to parents, or what they life costs/
Another baby born growin up in hateful worlds/
you need material things to get the girls/
But simple enough, that life still must go on//
and Livin ya lif,is how you prove your parents wrong//
Even though they ain't never seen you/
or cared to see this day/
Why do good people's lives end up this way/
I prove upon the power, given to me/
How I can't stand how you give up a child, to be wealthy/
Thats another life made, and another life lost/
parents don't know they value, so they don't give a fuck bout the cost/

Then the Child walks in unexpectedly in lives/
the parents care less of the stranger who has arrived//
they fucked up his life, and they don't give a damn about you/
If your whole life was a mistake, how could you accept the truth/
The flame inside his eyes burn with a mighty passion/
enough to frighten religions, from Hindu to Anglo-Saxon/
He longed upon this day, to see who gave him life//
but he say the disgrace and shame, cut up in him like a knife/
those who shouldv'e taken him in,but they ain't care for him/
If you already lost your life, how can you ever win?/
So the Hate purs outside, and feelings begin to flow/
Tells his father hes a coward, and refers to his moms as a ho/
the parents are shocked as fucked, and Apologies are spewed/
But none are excepted, yet he forgives them, though he tell them how he hates you/
they messed up upon his life, a mistake that won't be corrected/
I could understand some reasons, but for money, a baby rejected?/
Another baby born and another baby lost/
And stupid ass people, till this day, is the leading cause/

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Fuck man your open mics have elivated man...i felt this shit it was dope nice flow and great topic.................fuckin really like this verse dawg keep this shit up

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Soft focus

Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

thanks and UP!

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Props to u!!!It kicked some major Ass!!ONe of the best flows i've seen.

real good

uppin for more feedback

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This was OK

Needed sumthin though TOO BASIC vocab wise

JAY_Z's is better but you did ok

7.5/10