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Old 07-02-03, 10:09 AM   #1
Accelerate
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From: Bronx
B.R.E Presents: Zero Hour(last diss posted on this faggot)

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this will hopefully be the last diss i post on younggadget
unless he say some dumb shit

Ya soul is retarted, there ain't no helpin you now
Younggadget is a pitch, that just went foul
there is nothing right in you, just wrong coordinates
and nothing is good about you, much less great
You talk alot of shit but your rhymes don't back it up
you throw out garbage back at us, but its time that i play rough
Your a retarted ass nigga, and im tired of you
If anything, people only know about you in your crew
I spit fire but if you just added gas to the flame
and only a dumbass like you, would shoot for internet fame
if i wanted to post any personals,and really show them
i don't have too, cuz you post retarted shit in our crew forum
i think its a matter of fact, this beef has been cooked
hittin you wit personals, like bullets after i shoot
i shouldn't have to paint images or have a scene scenario
because you or bloodbanks rhymes can't back up ya foolish braggadocio
and your ass must be retarted cuz ya rhymes is just lame
and you got mad when i mentioned ya mother, but you don't know about pain
and you could think you elevated so much, but ya rhymes is still the same
You stupid, and lemme try to catch you tryin to rap
put you in dirt, so you could take a long nap
I don't need B.R.E to make your condition worse
if you challenged me to a battle, i could use this same verse
people would know that i recycled, but i would win, cuz ya still whack
and i'll show you Gary Coleman,when my diff'rent strokes, gibe you a heart attack
Some real type a shit, and your time is up to pretend
and its just useless to sign up your friend
we talk about elimimnating Herbs all the time
you think you can stay here nigga, i don't respect none of ya rhymes
you think we care about you, your secondary to us, while
you have named all over the place in ya profile
and then you want to know how we act so mature
you would know if ya took us all out of your shit signature
So fuck it dawg, this beef is already cooked
condition of its so bad, that you will not try to look
And now younggadget, do you know what
I already wasted enough time, tellin them how much you suck
and in short motherfucker,leave rapbattles, And SHUT THA FUCK UP/


YOU PUSSY,
I'M DONE WIT THIS SHIT
IM TIRED OF IT,
I GOT BETTER THINGS TO DO
THEN WASTE MY TIME ON FAGGOTS
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Old 07-05-03, 03:20 AM   #2
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...ummmmm horrible.Your fam in your crew was right you do need to elevate on your open mics...This was a rap..I thought you was just talking shit....yall shit wack....I also beat the shit out of Withersman.lol
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Old 07-05-03, 01:39 PM   #3
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Originally posted by younggadget
...ummmmm horrible.Your fam in your crew was right you do need to elevate on your open mics...This was a rap..I thought you was just talking shit....yall shit wack....I also beat the shit out of Withersman.lol


I gotta agree wit this cat , Some of ur punches were Aight...But u still gotta Elevate Fam

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Old 07-05-03, 01:52 PM   #4
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You could use a change of style, I personally am tired of this stereotypical style, you could use some elevation, but there were bright spots in this.
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